The man’s words echoed in my mind as he dragged me forward, his grip cruel and unyielding. The pain in my scalp was a relentless, burning ache, but it was nothing compared to the searing agony radiating from the bite on my neck. Blood trickled down in a warm, sticky line, and my breaths came in ragged gasps, shallow and uneven.
“She is here! Harold’s granddaughter!” he bellowed, his voice deep and rough, carrying across the village like a storm warning.
The villagers gathered quickly, their fiery red hair glowing like embers under the dying light of the setting sun. Their faces blurred as tears pricked my eyes, but the intensity of their gazes was impossible to miss. The fox-like tilt of their eyes gleamed with an eerie crimson light, and their expressions ranged from contemptuous sneers to cold, calculating stares.
“She reeks of them! Kill her!” a voice shouted from somewhere in the crowd, sharp and venomous.
I wanted to speak, to beg for mercy, but the words caught in my throat, blocked by the sheer terror that gripped me. My head swam as the village spun around me, a distorted kaleidoscope of vibrant tribal garb and snarling faces. The air itself seemed to pulse with their anger.
“She doesn’t even look like Harold’s kin,” a woman’s voice sneered, her red hair catching the light like fire. “Puny. Weak. Nothing more than a human.”
“Maybe she’s not!” another villager muttered, their tone dripping with doubt. “Seth’s got a thing for vengeance. Maybe he’s seeing ghosts where there aren’t any.”
Their words struck me like blows, their hatred and suspicion coiling around me like a living thing. I trembled, the ache in my body matched only by the crushing weight of their loathing. The man who held me, Seth, jerked my head back, forcing me to meet the seething, curious stares of the villagers.
“Shut up!” he barked at the crowd, his voice raw with fury. “Do you think I’m an idiot? Look at her!” He shook me roughly, making my head spin. “She reeks of them—wolves.”
“Seth, let her go!” A young man stepped forward, his presence cutting through the mob’s chaos like a blade. His figure was lean but commanding, his sharp crimson eyes narrowing at my captor. “We don’t know anything yet. This isn’t how we do things.”
“She’s wolf-blooded, Red!” Seth snapped, his grip tightening painfully on my hair. “Burn her! Like they burned our kin.”
The name caught my attention: *Red*. The man stood out, his fiery hair tied back in a neat braid, his movements deliberate and calm amidst the chaos. His voice was steady, measured, yet it carried an edge of steel.
“We’re not them,” Red countered, his gaze locked on Seth. “We’re not savages. If she really is Harold’s granddaughter, we need to know why she’s here. Killing her without answers doesn’t make sense.”
An elder stepped forward then, his weathered face lined with the wisdom and pain of years. His voice, when he spoke, was deep and resonant, cutting through the clamor. “Red is right. The moon will decide her fate. Until then, she lives.”
The elder’s words stilled the mob, though murmurs of dissent still lingered. Seth’s lip curled, but he didn’t argue further. Instead, he yanked me by the hair again, dragging me away from the crowd. My feet stumbled over the uneven ground as he hauled me to a ramshackle hut at the edge of the village. Its walls leaned precariously, the wood dark and splintered with age. Without a word, he shoved me down a narrow set of steps into a damp, musty cellar.
The door slammed shut behind me, the sound echoing like a death knell. The darkness was absolute, swallowing me whole. My body crumpled onto the cold, unforgiving floor, the chill seeping into my bones. I couldn’t stop the tears that spilled over, mingling with the blood and grime on my face. My breaths came in shallow, panicked bursts as I struggled to stay conscious.
Memories flashed through my mind, unbidden and vivid. My parents’ secret—one I never should have known. The full moon, their transformation. The way their bodies contorted, their eyes glowing fiercely as they shifted into wolves. It had been a moment of awe and terror, a revelation that had shattered the foundation of my world. But how was I connected to this war between wolves and foxes? Why was Harold’s name—a name I didn’t even recognize—enough to send these people into a frenzy?
The sound of footsteps broke through my spiraling thoughts. A flickering light pierced the darkness, and Red appeared, holding a candle. His expression was soft but guarded, his sharp features illuminated by the wavering glow.
“I apologize for Seth’s behavior,” he said quietly. He set the candle down and knelt beside me, opening a small leather pouch.
“What do you want?” My voice was barely audible, hoarse from the strain of my screams earlier.
“To help,” he replied simply. He pulled out a small jar of salve, his movements careful as he examined the bite on my neck. “You’re not from here. Your clothes—they’re not from the Arcane Institute.”
The name meant nothing to me, but his eyes gleamed with recognition, a flicker of something that might have been hope. I was too weak to argue, too tired to ask questions. Instead, I let him work in silence as he cleaned the wound.
As he applied the salve, he began to speak. “This war between wolves and foxes—it wasn’t always this way. For centuries, there was peace. But that peace was fragile. A drought came, and with it, desperation. A rogue faction of wolves, led by Fenrir, broke the truce, attacking a fox settlement to steal their water. It was the first betrayal.”
His voice was steady, but there was a deep sadness in his tone. I winced as he pressed a clean bandage to my neck, his words sinking in.
“Fenrir’s greed sparked a conflict that has lasted generations,” Red continued. “And now, it’s all we know. Fighting. Hate. Loss.”
“Why does it matter who I am?” I croaked, the question clawing its way out despite my exhaustion.
Red’s gaze met mine, and for the first time, I saw vulnerability in his eyes. “Because if you are Harold’s granddaughter, you might be the key to ending it.”
His words left me reeling, a storm of confusion and fear crashing through me. Me? A key to ending a centuries-old war? I didn’t know how to respond, so I didn’t. Instead, I watched as he set down a plate of food and a blanket before leaving the room.
As the door shut behind him, his final words lingered in the air, heavy with hope and desperation. Could I really be the answer to this ancient, senseless conflict? The thought was as terrifying as it was impossible, and I was left alone in the dark, trembling with uncertainty
Here's the revised version of *Anne and the Hidden World*. I hope you enjoy it! 😊
Weeks had passed since my capture, each day merging into an agonizing blur. Seth’s relentless torment became a grim routine, his fury like an unquenchable fire. His every action spoke of vengeance, each cruel act fuelled by a pain that had long since consumed him. Rumors whispered through the village that he had lost his family to werewolves. The tragedy had hollowed him out, leaving only hatred to fill the void. His anguish had twisted into something monstrous, something that sought to share its misery with others.“I won’t kill you yet,” Seth hissed, his grin sharp and cruel. He leaned close, his breath hot against my face. Moments before, he’d nearly drowned me, holding my head underwater until darkness edged my vision. My body convulsed with exhaustion, water streaming from my lips as I gasped for air.Instead of giving him the satisfaction of my fear, I spat blood in his face. The defiance lit a fire in his eyes. His hand came down hard, slapping me with enough force to split my l
Several weeks had passed since my ordeal ended. Life in the village had found a fragile rhythm, though mistrust still lingered like a shadow. The villagers' wary acceptance of my master and me was tenuous at best. Each day, Red escorted me to a hidden spot deep within the forest, where the children gathered for lessons. It wasn’t much—a clearing surrounded by towering trees that formed a natural barrier—but it was ours. The sun rose sluggishly, its soft golden light bathing the makeshift classroom in warmth, as if reluctant to disturb the peace.The children were already waiting, some eager, others simply present because of their loyalty to Red. One girl, small and wide-eyed, raised her hand, her innocent curiosity piercing through the silence. "What is a dream, Anne?" she asked, her voice so soft it was almost swallowed by the rustle of leaves.I knelt beside her, meeting her gaze. It was hard to answer a question like that, knowing the world they faced. Not all the children trusted m
A resigned sigh escaped my lips as I sank into the comforting softness of my bed. The weight of the day pressed down on me, heavier than the exhaustion I should have felt from school. For most students, life followed a predictable rhythm: home, school, maybe a club, then back home. But not for me. My path diverged sharply.Every day after school, my siblings and I trudged to the old temple on the outskirts of town for training that felt like walking a tightrope between life and death. Our master, a strict yet mysterious martial artist, shaped each lesson to our limits—and sometimes beyond. Each strike, each fall, was meant to make us stronger. To prepare us for what was out there."I won’t let that happen again," I whispered to the ceiling, my fists clenched as Allyson’s glowing eyes burned in my memory. The words tasted bitter, like a promise I couldn't break. My chest tightened as the memory of that terrible day clawed its way into my mind—Allyson’s rage, the bullies’ screams, and th
A tattoo—small but intricate—etched just below my skin. The infinity symbol, its delicate lines looping and intertwining seamlessly, radiated a sense of endless continuity. It was beautiful but haunting. A chill ran down my spine as I lightly traced the design with my fingers. My skin tingled at the touch, as if the mark carried some latent energy.“Why do I have the same tattoo as the young boy’s mom?” I whispered under my breath. My voice sounded foreign, trembling with a mix of disbelief and fear. Gently, I pressed the area around the mark, hoping for some kind of answer, but all I got was silence and the faint hum of the morning. Anxiety bubbled inside me. Was this some bizarre coincidence, or was there something more sinister at play? The memory of the boy’s mother flashed through my mind. Her smile had been kind, yet there was something about her presence that had lingered, like a shadow that refused to fade.The sound of my door slamming open shattered my thoughts.“Anne!” my yo
After a brief scolding from my teacher, I was sent to assist the librarian. The library was a sanctuary of towering shelves and soft whispers, its grandeur unexpectedly breathtaking. The scent of aged books and polished wood wrapped around me like a comforting cloak.Wandering through the aisles, I stumbled upon a dimly lit corner that exuded an eerie presence. A single book stood out—its cover blank and edges charred.Curious, I picked it up. "Weird," I muttered, flipping through its brittle pages. My blood ran cold when I saw my name inscribed on the last page.Before I could react, a sharp pain shot through my finger. A single drop of blood fell onto the page, and the air around me shifted.The ground trembled, the shelves rattling violently. A howling wind filled the room as the book glowed in my hands, its light blinding.I tried to close it, but my hands wouldn’t obey. The light grew brighter, enveloping me in its searing embrace. My thoughts scattered, panic surging as I felt my
Several weeks had passed since my ordeal ended. Life in the village had found a fragile rhythm, though mistrust still lingered like a shadow. The villagers' wary acceptance of my master and me was tenuous at best. Each day, Red escorted me to a hidden spot deep within the forest, where the children gathered for lessons. It wasn’t much—a clearing surrounded by towering trees that formed a natural barrier—but it was ours. The sun rose sluggishly, its soft golden light bathing the makeshift classroom in warmth, as if reluctant to disturb the peace.The children were already waiting, some eager, others simply present because of their loyalty to Red. One girl, small and wide-eyed, raised her hand, her innocent curiosity piercing through the silence. "What is a dream, Anne?" she asked, her voice so soft it was almost swallowed by the rustle of leaves.I knelt beside her, meeting her gaze. It was hard to answer a question like that, knowing the world they faced. Not all the children trusted m
Weeks had passed since my capture, each day merging into an agonizing blur. Seth’s relentless torment became a grim routine, his fury like an unquenchable fire. His every action spoke of vengeance, each cruel act fuelled by a pain that had long since consumed him. Rumors whispered through the village that he had lost his family to werewolves. The tragedy had hollowed him out, leaving only hatred to fill the void. His anguish had twisted into something monstrous, something that sought to share its misery with others.“I won’t kill you yet,” Seth hissed, his grin sharp and cruel. He leaned close, his breath hot against my face. Moments before, he’d nearly drowned me, holding my head underwater until darkness edged my vision. My body convulsed with exhaustion, water streaming from my lips as I gasped for air.Instead of giving him the satisfaction of my fear, I spat blood in his face. The defiance lit a fire in his eyes. His hand came down hard, slapping me with enough force to split my l
The man’s words echoed in my mind as he dragged me forward, his grip cruel and unyielding. The pain in my scalp was a relentless, burning ache, but it was nothing compared to the searing agony radiating from the bite on my neck. Blood trickled down in a warm, sticky line, and my breaths came in ragged gasps, shallow and uneven.“She is here! Harold’s granddaughter!” he bellowed, his voice deep and rough, carrying across the village like a storm warning.The villagers gathered quickly, their fiery red hair glowing like embers under the dying light of the setting sun. Their faces blurred as tears pricked my eyes, but the intensity of their gazes was impossible to miss. The fox-like tilt of their eyes gleamed with an eerie crimson light, and their expressions ranged from contemptuous sneers to cold, calculating stares.“She reeks of them! Kill her!” a voice shouted from somewhere in the crowd, sharp and venomous.I wanted to speak, to beg for mercy, but the words caught in my throat, bloc
After a brief scolding from my teacher, I was sent to assist the librarian. The library was a sanctuary of towering shelves and soft whispers, its grandeur unexpectedly breathtaking. The scent of aged books and polished wood wrapped around me like a comforting cloak.Wandering through the aisles, I stumbled upon a dimly lit corner that exuded an eerie presence. A single book stood out—its cover blank and edges charred.Curious, I picked it up. "Weird," I muttered, flipping through its brittle pages. My blood ran cold when I saw my name inscribed on the last page.Before I could react, a sharp pain shot through my finger. A single drop of blood fell onto the page, and the air around me shifted.The ground trembled, the shelves rattling violently. A howling wind filled the room as the book glowed in my hands, its light blinding.I tried to close it, but my hands wouldn’t obey. The light grew brighter, enveloping me in its searing embrace. My thoughts scattered, panic surging as I felt my
A tattoo—small but intricate—etched just below my skin. The infinity symbol, its delicate lines looping and intertwining seamlessly, radiated a sense of endless continuity. It was beautiful but haunting. A chill ran down my spine as I lightly traced the design with my fingers. My skin tingled at the touch, as if the mark carried some latent energy.“Why do I have the same tattoo as the young boy’s mom?” I whispered under my breath. My voice sounded foreign, trembling with a mix of disbelief and fear. Gently, I pressed the area around the mark, hoping for some kind of answer, but all I got was silence and the faint hum of the morning. Anxiety bubbled inside me. Was this some bizarre coincidence, or was there something more sinister at play? The memory of the boy’s mother flashed through my mind. Her smile had been kind, yet there was something about her presence that had lingered, like a shadow that refused to fade.The sound of my door slamming open shattered my thoughts.“Anne!” my yo
A resigned sigh escaped my lips as I sank into the comforting softness of my bed. The weight of the day pressed down on me, heavier than the exhaustion I should have felt from school. For most students, life followed a predictable rhythm: home, school, maybe a club, then back home. But not for me. My path diverged sharply.Every day after school, my siblings and I trudged to the old temple on the outskirts of town for training that felt like walking a tightrope between life and death. Our master, a strict yet mysterious martial artist, shaped each lesson to our limits—and sometimes beyond. Each strike, each fall, was meant to make us stronger. To prepare us for what was out there."I won’t let that happen again," I whispered to the ceiling, my fists clenched as Allyson’s glowing eyes burned in my memory. The words tasted bitter, like a promise I couldn't break. My chest tightened as the memory of that terrible day clawed its way into my mind—Allyson’s rage, the bullies’ screams, and th