A tattoo—small but intricate—etched just below my skin. The infinity symbol, its delicate lines looping and intertwining seamlessly, radiated a sense of endless continuity. It was beautiful but haunting. A chill ran down my spine as I lightly traced the design with my fingers. My skin tingled at the touch, as if the mark carried some latent energy.
“Why do I have the same tattoo as the young boy’s mom?” I whispered under my breath. My voice sounded foreign, trembling with a mix of disbelief and fear. Gently, I pressed the area around the mark, hoping for some kind of answer, but all I got was silence and the faint hum of the morning. Anxiety bubbled inside me. Was this some bizarre coincidence, or was there something more sinister at play? The memory of the boy’s mother flashed through my mind. Her smile had been kind, yet there was something about her presence that had lingered, like a shadow that refused to fade.
The sound of my door slamming open shattered my thoughts.
“Anne!” my youngest brother, Helix, burst into the room, his energy hitting me like a tidal wave. He was dressed in his usual chaos—an oversized hoodie, mismatched socks, and his ever-present mischievous grin. His brown hair stuck up in unruly tufts, and his ash-gray eyes sparkled with humor. “Wow, you look like crap,” he said, crossing his arms and leaning against the doorframe like a little prince surveying his kingdom.
I glared at him. “Thanks for the confidence boost, Helix. Really needed that.”
He shrugged, unbothered by my sarcasm. “Just saying. You look like you wrestled a bear in your sleep and lost. I could draw it for you if you want—illustrate the epic battle.”
I rolled my eyes, pushing him toward the door. “Out. Now.”
“Fine, fine,” he said, laughing as he backed out. “You’re no fun.” His laugh was infectious, and I found myself smiling despite the knot of worry in my chest. Helix had always been the troublemaker in our family. Growing up, he lived to prank us—switching my shampoo for glitter, replacing my alarm tone with a screaming goat, or hiding my homework. Yet, in his own way, he had a knack for making even the darkest days feel lighter.
Before I could shut the door, Henry, our middle brother, appeared, his posture stiff and composed as always. His jet-black hair was combed back perfectly, and his sharp, dark eyes scanned the scene dispassionately. “The average recommended sleep for teenagers is eight to ten hours per night,” he said without preamble. “You’re clearly not meeting that benchmark, Anne.”
“Thanks, Henry,” I said dryly. “Did you come all the way here just to tell me I look tired?”
“Yes,” he replied, completely serious. “You’re welcome.”
“What’s going on?” Allyson’s groggy voice joined the fray. She shuffled down the hallway, rubbing her ash-blue eyes. Her silver hair was a tangled mess, and her usually calm expression was marred by a sleepy frown. As the eldest, she was often the mediator of our chaos, the one who kept us from killing each other.
“Nothing important,” I snapped, stepping back into my room and shutting the door. I wasn’t in the mood to entertain my siblings’ banter, not with the tattoo burning in my thoughts. Their voices faded as I moved around the room, gathering my things for school. The mark on my shoulder remained a constant weight on my mind, its presence unnervingly familiar and utterly alien at the same time.
Downstairs, breakfast was its usual solemn affair. My father sat at the head of the table, his long black hair tied back neatly. His muscular build and stern demeanor radiated authority, though his eyes rarely met ours. Across from him, my mother sipped her tea, her ash-blond hair pulled into a flawless bun. She wore the same distant expression she always had, as if her mind was somewhere else entirely.
We didn’t talk much during meals. It wasn’t that they were cruel or demanding; they just didn’t ask questions. They never pressured us about grades or interrogated us about our lives. But they also didn’t know about the secrets we kept, the things we’d endured, or the truths we’d discovered. And deep down, I doubted they’d want to know.
I ate quickly, my thoughts preoccupied with the tattoo. It loomed in my mind, an enigma I couldn’t escape. By the time I left the house, I was practically vibrating with unease.
The train station was unusually quiet. The usual chatter of morning commuters was muted, replaced by an eerie stillness. I stepped onto the train and immediately noticed something was off. The car was empty—completely empty. The usual crush of bodies and muffled conversations was gone, leaving only silence and flickering overhead lights.
I slid into a seat, clutching my bag tightly. My eyes darted around, scanning the shadows for any sign of life. The emptiness pressed down on me, making it hard to breathe. Then, at the far end of the car, I spotted a familiar figure. Dale.
Dale is like the school's heartthrob, catching every girl's eye with his tall frame, fair skin, captivating eyes, smooth voice, and physique that could make anyone do a double take. But, just to be clear, that doesn't include me. Now, I'm bringing up Dale because every girl falling for his charm becomes my sworn enemy. Dale and I go way back, not in a romantic way, though. We're neighbors, classmates, and childhood buddies, I guess. It's hard to put a label on what Dale and I are. And it's weird; whenever I'm in trouble, he shows up like my personal superhero, saves the day, and then ghosts me like it's no big deal. Besides those random heroic moments, we don't talk much.
“Mmm, this is awkward,” I muttered, sneaking a glance at him. He had his headphones on, bobbing his head to a beat I couldn’t hear.
I considered waving, but before I could, the train lurched to a stop, and the lights flickered ominously. A chill crept over me as a cloaked figure appeared at the far end of the car.
My breath hitched. The figure’s movements were slow but deliberate, each step echoing like a death knell. My pulse thundered in my ears as I instinctively moved back. Dale, noticing my distress, grabbed my arm and pulled me behind him.
The air grew thick, and glittering dust began to swirl around us. My eyelids grew heavy, the world tilting as the figure raised an arm.
The last thing I saw before darkness consumed me was Dale’s protective stance, his broad shoulders shielding me.
I woke to the sharp sting of a book smacking my head.
"Anne!" my teacher’s voice snapped. "See me in my office after class."
I blinked, disoriented, finding myself back in the classroom. My heart raced as I tried to process what had happened. Was it all a dream? My skin felt clammy, and my limbs were heavy, as though I’d run a marathon.
Across the room, Dale sat at his desk, calm and focused, as though nothing had happened.
As I gathered my things, the memory of the cloaked figure lingered, vivid and unsettling. Was it just a dream, or something more?
Here's the revised version of *Anne and the Hidden World*. I hope you enjoy it! 😊
After a brief scolding from my teacher, I was sent to assist the librarian. The library was a sanctuary of towering shelves and soft whispers, its grandeur unexpectedly breathtaking. The scent of aged books and polished wood wrapped around me like a comforting cloak.Wandering through the aisles, I stumbled upon a dimly lit corner that exuded an eerie presence. A single book stood out—its cover blank and edges charred.Curious, I picked it up. "Weird," I muttered, flipping through its brittle pages. My blood ran cold when I saw my name inscribed on the last page.Before I could react, a sharp pain shot through my finger. A single drop of blood fell onto the page, and the air around me shifted.The ground trembled, the shelves rattling violently. A howling wind filled the room as the book glowed in my hands, its light blinding.I tried to close it, but my hands wouldn’t obey. The light grew brighter, enveloping me in its searing embrace. My thoughts scattered, panic surging as I felt my
The man’s words echoed in my mind as he dragged me forward, his grip cruel and unyielding. The pain in my scalp was a relentless, burning ache, but it was nothing compared to the searing agony radiating from the bite on my neck. Blood trickled down in a warm, sticky line, and my breaths came in ragged gasps, shallow and uneven.“She is here! Harold’s granddaughter!” he bellowed, his voice deep and rough, carrying across the village like a storm warning.The villagers gathered quickly, their fiery red hair glowing like embers under the dying light of the setting sun. Their faces blurred as tears pricked my eyes, but the intensity of their gazes was impossible to miss. The fox-like tilt of their eyes gleamed with an eerie crimson light, and their expressions ranged from contemptuous sneers to cold, calculating stares.“She reeks of them! Kill her!” a voice shouted from somewhere in the crowd, sharp and venomous.I wanted to speak, to beg for mercy, but the words caught in my throat, bloc
Weeks had passed since my capture, each day merging into an agonizing blur. Seth’s relentless torment became a grim routine, his fury like an unquenchable fire. His every action spoke of vengeance, each cruel act fuelled by a pain that had long since consumed him. Rumors whispered through the village that he had lost his family to werewolves. The tragedy had hollowed him out, leaving only hatred to fill the void. His anguish had twisted into something monstrous, something that sought to share its misery with others.“I won’t kill you yet,” Seth hissed, his grin sharp and cruel. He leaned close, his breath hot against my face. Moments before, he’d nearly drowned me, holding my head underwater until darkness edged my vision. My body convulsed with exhaustion, water streaming from my lips as I gasped for air.Instead of giving him the satisfaction of my fear, I spat blood in his face. The defiance lit a fire in his eyes. His hand came down hard, slapping me with enough force to split my l
Several weeks had passed since my ordeal ended. Life in the village had found a fragile rhythm, though mistrust still lingered like a shadow. The villagers' wary acceptance of my master and me was tenuous at best. Each day, Red escorted me to a hidden spot deep within the forest, where the children gathered for lessons. It wasn’t much—a clearing surrounded by towering trees that formed a natural barrier—but it was ours. The sun rose sluggishly, its soft golden light bathing the makeshift classroom in warmth, as if reluctant to disturb the peace.The children were already waiting, some eager, others simply present because of their loyalty to Red. One girl, small and wide-eyed, raised her hand, her innocent curiosity piercing through the silence. "What is a dream, Anne?" she asked, her voice so soft it was almost swallowed by the rustle of leaves.I knelt beside her, meeting her gaze. It was hard to answer a question like that, knowing the world they faced. Not all the children trusted m
A resigned sigh escaped my lips as I sank into the comforting softness of my bed. The weight of the day pressed down on me, heavier than the exhaustion I should have felt from school. For most students, life followed a predictable rhythm: home, school, maybe a club, then back home. But not for me. My path diverged sharply.Every day after school, my siblings and I trudged to the old temple on the outskirts of town for training that felt like walking a tightrope between life and death. Our master, a strict yet mysterious martial artist, shaped each lesson to our limits—and sometimes beyond. Each strike, each fall, was meant to make us stronger. To prepare us for what was out there."I won’t let that happen again," I whispered to the ceiling, my fists clenched as Allyson’s glowing eyes burned in my memory. The words tasted bitter, like a promise I couldn't break. My chest tightened as the memory of that terrible day clawed its way into my mind—Allyson’s rage, the bullies’ screams, and th
Several weeks had passed since my ordeal ended. Life in the village had found a fragile rhythm, though mistrust still lingered like a shadow. The villagers' wary acceptance of my master and me was tenuous at best. Each day, Red escorted me to a hidden spot deep within the forest, where the children gathered for lessons. It wasn’t much—a clearing surrounded by towering trees that formed a natural barrier—but it was ours. The sun rose sluggishly, its soft golden light bathing the makeshift classroom in warmth, as if reluctant to disturb the peace.The children were already waiting, some eager, others simply present because of their loyalty to Red. One girl, small and wide-eyed, raised her hand, her innocent curiosity piercing through the silence. "What is a dream, Anne?" she asked, her voice so soft it was almost swallowed by the rustle of leaves.I knelt beside her, meeting her gaze. It was hard to answer a question like that, knowing the world they faced. Not all the children trusted m
Weeks had passed since my capture, each day merging into an agonizing blur. Seth’s relentless torment became a grim routine, his fury like an unquenchable fire. His every action spoke of vengeance, each cruel act fuelled by a pain that had long since consumed him. Rumors whispered through the village that he had lost his family to werewolves. The tragedy had hollowed him out, leaving only hatred to fill the void. His anguish had twisted into something monstrous, something that sought to share its misery with others.“I won’t kill you yet,” Seth hissed, his grin sharp and cruel. He leaned close, his breath hot against my face. Moments before, he’d nearly drowned me, holding my head underwater until darkness edged my vision. My body convulsed with exhaustion, water streaming from my lips as I gasped for air.Instead of giving him the satisfaction of my fear, I spat blood in his face. The defiance lit a fire in his eyes. His hand came down hard, slapping me with enough force to split my l
The man’s words echoed in my mind as he dragged me forward, his grip cruel and unyielding. The pain in my scalp was a relentless, burning ache, but it was nothing compared to the searing agony radiating from the bite on my neck. Blood trickled down in a warm, sticky line, and my breaths came in ragged gasps, shallow and uneven.“She is here! Harold’s granddaughter!” he bellowed, his voice deep and rough, carrying across the village like a storm warning.The villagers gathered quickly, their fiery red hair glowing like embers under the dying light of the setting sun. Their faces blurred as tears pricked my eyes, but the intensity of their gazes was impossible to miss. The fox-like tilt of their eyes gleamed with an eerie crimson light, and their expressions ranged from contemptuous sneers to cold, calculating stares.“She reeks of them! Kill her!” a voice shouted from somewhere in the crowd, sharp and venomous.I wanted to speak, to beg for mercy, but the words caught in my throat, bloc
After a brief scolding from my teacher, I was sent to assist the librarian. The library was a sanctuary of towering shelves and soft whispers, its grandeur unexpectedly breathtaking. The scent of aged books and polished wood wrapped around me like a comforting cloak.Wandering through the aisles, I stumbled upon a dimly lit corner that exuded an eerie presence. A single book stood out—its cover blank and edges charred.Curious, I picked it up. "Weird," I muttered, flipping through its brittle pages. My blood ran cold when I saw my name inscribed on the last page.Before I could react, a sharp pain shot through my finger. A single drop of blood fell onto the page, and the air around me shifted.The ground trembled, the shelves rattling violently. A howling wind filled the room as the book glowed in my hands, its light blinding.I tried to close it, but my hands wouldn’t obey. The light grew brighter, enveloping me in its searing embrace. My thoughts scattered, panic surging as I felt my
A tattoo—small but intricate—etched just below my skin. The infinity symbol, its delicate lines looping and intertwining seamlessly, radiated a sense of endless continuity. It was beautiful but haunting. A chill ran down my spine as I lightly traced the design with my fingers. My skin tingled at the touch, as if the mark carried some latent energy.“Why do I have the same tattoo as the young boy’s mom?” I whispered under my breath. My voice sounded foreign, trembling with a mix of disbelief and fear. Gently, I pressed the area around the mark, hoping for some kind of answer, but all I got was silence and the faint hum of the morning. Anxiety bubbled inside me. Was this some bizarre coincidence, or was there something more sinister at play? The memory of the boy’s mother flashed through my mind. Her smile had been kind, yet there was something about her presence that had lingered, like a shadow that refused to fade.The sound of my door slamming open shattered my thoughts.“Anne!” my yo
A resigned sigh escaped my lips as I sank into the comforting softness of my bed. The weight of the day pressed down on me, heavier than the exhaustion I should have felt from school. For most students, life followed a predictable rhythm: home, school, maybe a club, then back home. But not for me. My path diverged sharply.Every day after school, my siblings and I trudged to the old temple on the outskirts of town for training that felt like walking a tightrope between life and death. Our master, a strict yet mysterious martial artist, shaped each lesson to our limits—and sometimes beyond. Each strike, each fall, was meant to make us stronger. To prepare us for what was out there."I won’t let that happen again," I whispered to the ceiling, my fists clenched as Allyson’s glowing eyes burned in my memory. The words tasted bitter, like a promise I couldn't break. My chest tightened as the memory of that terrible day clawed its way into my mind—Allyson’s rage, the bullies’ screams, and th