Elena
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Hi Lena,
It’s good to talk to someone from San Diego.
It took me some time to get back, and I would like to apologize for that, but I’m a bit shocked.
This is not quite what I meant when I said I needed someone to talk to, and I’m a bit confused as to why you would send me a ‘prison riddle,’ but so be it.
You asked me if I knew what kind of bars
won’t keep a prisoner in jail.
The answer to that corny question is obviously chocolate bars. Even though the riddle was a bit weak, the intentions were definitely there, and you’ve caught my attention.
I think it’s only fair for me to ask you something in return. I was very intrigued by not only your way of talking but also your use of emojis, so I just have to ask. How old are you?
Marvin
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“W-what?” I mumbled, confused. I almost fell from my bed and rubbed my eyes to see whether I was dreaming or not.
It was still early. Of course, I was dreaming. This couldn’t be real. I reached beside me to turn on my lamp before I took another look at my phone.
No matter how many times I read the message, it was still there. That Marvin guy from the pen pal program had really sent me something in return. I had forgotten all about him, and two weeks had already passed.
“What!” I gasped as I read through the message for what would’ve been the fifth time. This was the first time I interacted with someone in prison, and I could hardly believe it. “What the fuck.”
I dialed Victoria’s number and waited for her to answer the phone. “Come on, come on,” I whispered.
“Lena?” Victoria spoke. I let out a relieved breath and didn’t know where to start. “Tori, he has answered!” I yelled out. “The Marvin prison guy from the bet actually replied, and his message is kind of rude, actually a bit terrifying—but that doesn’t really matter, because he honestly answered, and I don’t know what the hell I have to do now and—“
“Calm down!” Victoria stopped me from talking before she let out a squeal. “Hold up, he replied?”
“Yes!”
“Oh my god!”
“I know!”
“So, what are you going to do?” Victoria wondered. I hadn’t even thought about that, and we hadn’t even expected him to reply. “I don’t know!” I stressed. “Do I write him back? Do I ignore him? What do I do!”
“Write him back, of course!”
This was all some kind of adventure for Tori. We lived in an extremely brave neighborhood where the chances of meeting someone who had gone to prison were about zero to one.
“Tori, are you serious?” I frowned. “Yes!” Tori spoke and let out another squeal. “Wait, what did he say? Read the message!”
“O-okay.”
I read Tori the message and cringed even more after reading it out loud. My message sounded so embarrassing, but it was only because I had no idea he would actually reply.
“Oh no!” Tori laughed out loud. “He’s definitely making fun of you, and he probably thinks you’re like fifteen.”
“I know.” I sulked in embarrassment. Something inside of me told me that it was necessary to reply, but only so I could clear up our misunderstanding. It probably didn’t even matter because it wasn’t as if I would hear from him ever again. “Tori, what do I say?”
“Just end the conversation on a good note,” Tori told me. “Thank him for replying and tell him that it was all a stupid bet and that you wish him the best.”
“Good plan!”
“Don’t hang up. I’ll send something right now.”
I took my time to type my response and read it out loud for Tori.
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Dear Marvin,
Yes, the answer is chocolate bars, but I must say, you’ve hurt my feelings😭
To be honest, this started as a bet, and I didn’t even know you would reply. I promise you I’m not always like this, and I also don’t make corny jokes in real life!
I’m 21, by the way😔 (almost 22)
I’m sorry for my use of emojis, but I just can’t help myself😒
Anyway, I’m so sorry for bothering you, but now that you’ve actually replied, it means we can all let this rest!
Thanks for the reply, and wishing you all the best!
Lena♥️
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“See,” Tori spoke. “That wasn’t that difficult, now was it?”
“Should I send it?” I asked. I had the urge to keep this in my drafts and to delete his message. “You should!” Tori encouraged me. “You have nothing to lose, and it’s a polite thing to reply.”
“Okay,” I spoke with closed eyes as I carefully pressed send. “Wait!” Tori suddenly called out. “You didn’t add any emojis this time, right?”
“Shit!”
“Oh my god.” Victoria sighed, disappointed. “You aren’t making it any easier for yourself.”
I buried my face between my hands and prepared myself for disaster. The plan was to end the conversation, not to start another one. “What do I do if he replies?”
“Leave him hanging, of course.” Victoria snickered. “Wait, don’t tell me you’re actually anticipating his reply?” She spoke. “Lena, this guy is a felon—“
“Of course I’m not!” I denied her accusations. “And just so you know, you’re the one who told me to reply.”
“Yes, so you could end the conversation,” Tori told me. “Anyway, I have to go—I have this important business meeting, and I can’t be late.”
Of course, Victoria was busy.
Unlike me, she had an actual job and didn’t have time to play around on some stupid website. “It’s fine, Victoria,” I told her. “I’ll call you later, okay?”
“Works for me, bye!”
“Works for me, bye!” I mimicked in a childish tone. I didn’t know whether I was jealous of Victoria or whether I wanted to be her. I made my way out of bed and put on my wool robe before I went downstairs.
I had never mentioned the program to my dad, and it was a good thing I hadn’t. He would’ve gotten poor Marvin thrown into solitary if he knew he’d answered. I didn’t even want to start about my brother. If my dad was crazy, Alex was absolutely nuts.
I made my way to the kitchen to look for my dad, but I couldn’t find him. Today was his day off, and if he wasn’t at work, you could always find him in the kitchen behind his laptop.
I remember how he used to spend his day off with Maddens, but a lot had changed in four years. “Dad!”
“He’s not here. Strange.” I whispered to myself as I turned around to make my way to his office. “Dad!” I knocked on the door and waited for his reply.
Maybe he was too busy today?
I was just about to walk away before I decided to wait it out. What if he had dropped dead in his office?
“Dad, I’m coming in!” I spoke one more time. I still didn’t get a reply, so I opened the door and almost dropped my jaw as I looked at my dad. He was fast asleep with his head glued against his desk.
“Dad?” I whispered and stepped forward. I shook his shoulder and watched as he slowly raised his head. “Hmm, I must’ve fallen asleep.” He mumbled. He wasn’t his usual cheerful self, which made me believe whatever happened at work was something serious. It had to be if it had kept him awake for the entire night.
“Dad, you’ve been working the entire night—haven’t you?” I spoke disappointed. “And what’s with the eye-bags? Did you even sleep?”
My dad rubbed his eyes and gave me a confused look. His look told me, where am I? Who am I? What am I even doing here?
“No,” He yawned. “I’ve been up all night, trying to find something against the Castillo cartel, but I’ve failed.” He breathed. “And now, because of our failure, the son of our biggest piece and Madden’s killer will be walking out soon.”
“Jeez.” I frowned. “Sounds serious.”
“Because it is serious.” My dad got into the story. He loved talking about crimes, and he needed someone to listen, and unfortunately, I was that someone. “The DEA are making a big mistake.” He shared. “They want to work with our biggest enemies to take down another group, the Hernandez, while the real killer is right in front of our eyes.”
“These people...they are slowly taking over the state as if it’s nothing.” He ranted. “They’re up to no good, and the worst thing is that they’re amongst us. They are our neighbors, our friends, our—“
“Can I see him?” I interrupted my dad. “You know...the man that did this to Maddens, I’ve never seen him before.”
I was not going to lie. Hearing those people were amongst us did scare me a little. “You’re right.” My dad pointed out as he opened his desk and pulled out a map.
“Even though information like this was supposed to be top secret, you should know what they look like, just in case you happen to catch one of them on the streets.” He spoke enthusiastically and opened the map.
“This right here!”
He pressed his finger on top of the picture of two men and stared at me with big eyes. “These are Victor Vives and Pedro Vidal, Aka Panther.” He spoke through gritted teeth. “These are the assholes who had a big part in letting M. Castillo walk out free.”
“M. Castillo,” I whispered. It was a name I had often heard at dad’s job. “Are there two M. Castillo’s?” I wondered. My dad nodded his head and flipped the page. “This is the head of the cartel.” He pointed out. “This is Mario Castillo, and the other one is his son.”
“Oh,” I forced a smile on my face. I already regretted getting into it. I knew my dad was still hurting because of Maddens, but this obsession was going too far.
“And this right here,” My dad continued as he prepared himself to flip over the page. “This is his son, M—“
“Here you guys are!” My brother Alex spoke as he walked through the door with a bag full of groceries. My dad quickly closed the map and placed it back into the drawer while Alex looked back and forth between us.
“Dad, you know she can’t see that.” Alex furrowed his eyebrows. He had different thoughts from my brother and did not want me to get involved. He believed that the information the DEA provided was meant to be kept top secret, and even though my dad was his superior, he was not afraid to go against him.
“She has the right to know, Alex.” My dad spoke. This had always been a sensitive subject for both of them. It wasn’t only because of Maddens but also because of my mom, who had abandoned us to be with some villain. I was five years old, so I didn’t remember much, but Alex was ten, and it took a long time for him to get over it.
Even until now, he still felt the need to protect me—just like my dad, but their ways were a bit different. “Too bad,” I shrugged to ease the tensions and patted Alex on his shoulder.
“I was just about to see M. Castillo, but it looks like he’ll have to wait.”
I walked past Alex and left my dad’s office. It wasn’t even a second before dad and Alex starting arguing like always.
“Home sweet home,” I whispered to myself and made my way upstairs, but I froze on the steps when I looked at my phone and saw that I had a notification.
How could it be?
It couldn’t be.
How was it possible to get a response this quickly? The site had convinced me that it took several hours before the email would get to the prisoner and a few more days for me to get a response.
I didn’t even know these people had access to the internet.
1 Inbox
From M. Romero
Marvin—Hi again, Lena.I wasn’t done talking to you, so it’s a bit rude of you to cut off our conversation, don’t you think?I would’ve never guessed you were a 21-year-old, but I like your energy.Thanks for the heart, although you missed the big letters, displaying this is NOT a dating site, I feel flattered.Now that I know your age, I want to know more about you. What are your hobbies? What are your goals?Waiting for your reply,Marvin(Ps. please stop with the emojis.)—“Is there anything wrong with my reply?” I asked my lawyer, Steven Laine. We had a meeting about the upcoming court date, and I felt the need to show him that I had finally replied to someone on the message board. The only issue was t
120 hours until releaseElenaTwo days...It had been two days since inmate Marvin Romero decided to send me back an email. It wouldn’t be too far stretched to admit that the email scared the living crap out of me.He seemed like the kind of person who was spoiled and wanted things to go his way. That’s the very same reason why I had decided not to let him have his way and tried to make him sweat.Okay, that wasn’t the only reason.I was afraid of Victoria’s reaction and knew she would tell me not to reply anymore, but something told me that it was my duty to respond. I mean, the email was a tiny bit rude, but he did ask me about my hobby’s and goals, right?That was nice.“Hello, earth to Elena!” Rona waved her hand in my face. “Oh, right—I’m sorry.” I apologized.“One large bloody
96 hours until releaseMarvin—Dear Marvin,The heart didn’t mean anything, and it’s just the way I talk. I know this is not a dating site, and I’m not looking for anyone to date either!!!Anyway, about my hobbies. I originally planned on becoming a lawyer, but I work as a mixologist at a small cocktail bar, so it clearly hasn’t worked out. I’m a bit too embarrassed to admit it, but I don’t really have any goals yet, but what’s the rush?(If things go wrong, I can always marry some rich guy🤑)Enough about me. You seem way too intelligent to be in prison, and you have a ridiculously long list of felonies. My question for you is, where did it go wrong, and how can I prevent the same thing from happening to me?From,Lena&mda
72 hours until release Elena A picture? This guy must’ve been absolutely nuts. Wasn’t the picture on my profile more than enough already? It was one of my best pictures, and it was in HD, so I didn’t know what he was getting at. I was unsure of whether to send a picture or not, but everything changed when I read the email for the fifth time. He didn’t seem as tough as he looked, and maybe if I sent pictures of myself, he would send some in return. Marvin was one of the few who had praised me for being a mixologist, and it felt good to know that he appreciated my job. It wasn’t as easy or useless as some people made it out to be. I gathered some courage and decided to write back. — Dear Marvin, Thank you for your encouraging words. You’re right. Being a mixologist requires some kind of special skill and is no
48 hours until releaseMarvin“Castillo, you have a visitor,” Stanfield spoke. I looked through the little glass of the steel door and furrowed my eyebrows."I'm not expecting anyone. Tell them to leave.”Stanfield opened the door and pushed me against the wall before he forcefully put me in handcuffs. “Hey!” I spoke, irritated. “Did you not hear me?”“I did.” Stanfield chuckled. “But I’m not going to tell Mario Castillo to come back another time. You can do it yourself.”Wait a minute.“My dad came to visit?”“The one and only,” Stanfield confirmed while he guided me out. The times he came to visit weren’t many, and I could count them on my hands. When he visited, it usually didn’t mean any good and often meant Santiago had screwed up again.The only thing I coul
24 hours until releaseElena—Dear Marvin,Link me up with your thirty cousins, all of them! (I’m serious)Thanks for your concerns, I know there are many bad people in this world, but I actually really enjoy talking to you. Tell me if I’m wrong, but I feel like we’re even becoming friends!Unfortunately, it’s just me, my dad, and my brother, but I might’ve overreacted a tiny bit. They’re honestly not as bad as I made them look, and they also have some good sides to them.I admire you for your dreams, and I can’t even imagine how hard it must be too hope for freedom. Keep dreaming, Marvin, and who knows? One day your dreams might come true!I also took a look at the pictures you send me, and just like you, I also had to hold my breath. I think you might be one of
0 hours until releaseMarvin“Freedom!” I yelled out as I opened my arms and took in the smell of the fresh air. I was officially free, which meant I was officially working with the DEA to take down the Hernandez and officially a certified rat.Panther let out an annoyed huff and wrapped his suit jacket around my shoulder.“It’s cold. Please watch yourself.”“I am watching myself, and I look good, right, Laine?” I asked my lawyer. He patted me on my back with a forced smile on his face. “Panther is right, it’s a change of environment, and we don’t want you getting sick.”I rolled my eyes at their boring behavior and focused my attention on Stanfield, who had followed me outside. “I’m surprised you didn’t offer me your jacket,” I told him. “I thought you might because you followed me all the way up here&md
Marvin I opened the door to the living room, but no one seemed to have noticed me. The room was heavily decorated with balloons, and I could not understand why my dad decided to go full out. I had expected it to be much worse, but it was just my mom, Tiago, and Anya. The devil, my dad, was not even here, but I was not surprised.This was what he did. He liked to pretend as if he cared, while we all knew he didn’t. If it didn’t revolve around the business, he did not care. My eyes fell onto my mom, who was having a conversation with Tiago and Anya, before I stared at the ceiling, which was full of pink and blue balloons. “Is this your gender reveal or your baby shower?” Panther laughed at his own joke. It had already been a minute, but they still hadn’t noticed me. “Seems like I’m not that important, Panther,” I connected my fist with the door and knocked a few times to grab their attention. “Guess
ElenaOne week had passed since Lucas confirmed the meeting with Marvin, and today would finally be the day.I had spent the past week in a pool of emotions, constantly wondering how it would go. It could go either way. Marvin could either welcome me with open arms, or he had only agreed to meet me so he could yell at me some more.I dressed up as best as I could, went out of my comfort zone, and pulled out a yellow dress. It used to be my least favorite color until Marvin told me I looked pretty in it.My hair fell over my shoulders in soft waves, and I had put in some effort to put on some makeup.As I checked out my reflection in the hallway mirror one last time, I applied the last layer of lipgloss.“At this rate, your lips might fall off.” The sound of a voice behind me startled me, and I turned, my heart thumping in my chest. It was Dad, standing in the hallway, a faint expression on his face.My anxiety grew as I met his gaze. He was the last person I wanted to find out about m
ElenaThe sun fell perfectly on my skin as I lounged by the poolside in our family yard, with Rona and Victoria by my side.Everything was peaceful, so peaceful I couldn’t even believe it was real. Life had gone back to the way it use to as this was how we used to spend our days in the past.My bond with Dad had improved so much, we hadn’t argued since I had gotten back.Victoria’s voice cut through the peaceful silence. "Do you think I should reply to Victor's text?" A blush reached her cheeks.“I think you should!” Rona who had been informed about everything told her.It was quite amusing, considering Victoria had insisted I stay away from Marvin and it had even impacted our friendship. Now she was the one after the bad guy.Still, I couldn’t help but feel happy for her. She deserved this happiness, this chance at love.The two matched each other perfectly. They were both bossy and stubborn and almost shared the same name.My mind involuntarily wandered back to Marvin. His curious e
MarvinI was in Lucas’ car, on the way back to the Castillo estate. We had already been driving for a long time, an uncomfortable vibe swinging in the air as no one knew what to say. Each second stretched into minutes, and eventually into hours.The only noise was the sound of the radio.How could I say something, when I had yet to process everything? In a span of 24 hours, I was forced to make a decision and lost someone who I thought was my friend.My brother betrayed me.I had lost Elena.There was nothing to say.“Tiago, as far as everyone’s concerned, you didn't see anything today, and nothing happened today. ” I instructed, my voice cutting through the suffocating silence. As Tiago had already revealed, he didn’t always use his brains. “You saw nothing, you know nothing.”Tiago remained silent as I continued. “And you keep this from our father, Tiago. He must never find out...that you betrayed me.” The words almost made me chuckle. “I will deal with it. I’ll tell him that Panthe
MarvinEverything seemed foggy…It felt as if I was viewing the world through an underwater lens. That’s right, the car had just crashed. I blinked my eyes through the pain, and crawled away, groaning.There was no time for pain. The adrenaline pumped through my veins, bringing me back to reality. With heavy breaths and a ragged pulse drumming in my ears, I managed to get out of the car.My first instinct was to go to my brother, who was thrown out of the car. “Are you okay? Can you move?” I asked Tiago, who had luckily remained unharmed.He nodded his head, his eyes wide open as he took in the scene. With the car almost being on the edge of the cliff, we had barely survived. Did he want to take us all down with him?My head turned once I heard a groan, and there he was—Panther, semi-conscious, trying to pull himself together.A flicker of satisfaction went through my body. Good, I wanted him awake for this.“Let me give you a hand.” I dragged him out of the wreckage. His body seemed
MarvinWe were on our way back. Panther sat in the front passenger seat, Tiago in the back.As we were about halfway, there was an unspoken tension, and it was a good thing there was. By now, they were allowed to notice that I wasn’t in the mood at allIt smelled of treachery.Stopping at a stop sign, I tapped my fingers against the wheel, thinking about my next step. Hell, I didn’t even know what my next step would be. I only knew that there was no way in hell I could return with Panther.I couldn’t have him ratting out Elena.I just could not…"Tiago," I began, finally breaking the silence in the car. "I took care of Anya’s grave while you were gone." I wasn't sure why I had said it, but it felt necessary. If it’d make him feel like shit later on, good.He nodded as a somber look crossed his face. "Thank you, Marvin," he replied. “I knew I could count on you. I always can.”Yes, but can I count on you?Those were the words I so desperately wanted to ask, but I already knew the answe
Marvin“A-Already?” She frowned. “But of course, come in.” She invited, opening the door wider.“After you.” I turned to Panther, stepping aside. Tiago cared much more for him than he did for me, so it would only be appropriate. Right?After we entered the house, Ana led us to the living room, where we sat down."I'll go get Tiago. Please, make yourselves comfortable!" She called out, leaving the room.“Can I offer you some of our best liquor, sir?” A maid asked. Panther was just about to open his mouth, but I raised my hand to stop him, and kindly declined.“No, we’re good. Thank you, ma’am.” I said. "I need both of us to stay alert today." I exposed myself as my sharp gaze turned to Panther. This time he noticed, but said nothing.Only after a while, Panther huffed to break the silence. "You alright with being here, Marvin?" He asked, probably thinking my behavior had to do with something else.Years ago, Misty had been sleeping around with one of Ana’s sons, who was one of my close
MarvinIt had only been a few hours since I watched the video Anya left behind, along with countless files containing shocking information about Panther's betrayal. Not only Panter but also Tiago, the one I would take a bullet for.And poor Anya…Poor Anya had to pay with her life for trying to expose him. She could’ve told me the truth, she could’ve asked for my help—but she didn’t. Her love for Tiago must’ve been so big, she must’ve wanted enough evidence to show me he got manipulated.I felt shocked, numb, and in utter disbelief that my friend, my brother, had been betraying me. And on top of that, I had to deal with Elena's lies.How could I have been so blind? How could I have allowed myself to be played by three people I thought I could trust? I had always believed that I was strong, that my instincts were sharp. Yet, I was deceived.Me.The heir of the Castillo.All this time I had been keeping a close eye on Victor, while it was those three I really had to look out for.For a
Elena As I walked into the mansion, I immediately felt the tension in the air. It was just a gut feeling that something was about to happen, and I didn’t know why. It wasn’t too crazy, considering I planned on telling Marvin the truth. Dad and I had a deal, and now it was my job to hold up the end of the bargain. He needed me back home. “Marvin!” I called out his name, wondering if he was already home—but he didn't respond. “Marvin?” I walked further. “Mar—“ I stopped in my words as I saw him sitting at the kitchen table with a gun in front of him, and his head lowered. I swallowed as he held his hands together, and raised his head so I could see his eyes. There were filled with anger and disappointment. I wasn’t stupid. I knew what was happening. He had somehow found out the truth, the truth about everything. That must’ve been it. A breath escaped my lips as I reached for my pocket to secure Anya’s drive was still there. In one way there was a feeling of relief. I could fee
MarvinThe guys could talk all they pleased, but I wasn’t embarrassed for rushing to the house to apologize to Elena.My biggest goal was for her not to see what kind of monster I was, and unfortunately, she did. It was easy to blame Panther, but only one person was to blame—and that person was me.Seeing Lucas comforting her brought a sharp pain to my heart. Of course, the detective had to be there for her, while I couldn’t. Call it jealousy. I didn’t care.With Elena on my mind, I went straight home after handling business, but she was nowhere to be found. It wasn’t too far stretched to believe she might’ve run off with Lucas, the perfect detective.Hours went by as I sat at the dining table, waiting for her arrival—but there was still no sign of her.She wouldn’t respond to my calls, my texts—nothing.The second I heard footsteps at the front, I rushed to the door—thinking it was Elena. As I opened it, I realized that wasn’t the case. It was Misty.“What are you doing h—“ I was at