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Everyone was enjoying the beauty of the sunset and then the beauty of staying in a dark forest mountain, while playing, talking, teasing, and enjoying precious time with each other.Soon after the plethora of activities done by everyone, everyone was exhausted and decided to call it a night. Not long after, even Tian Tian's group decided to call it a night and went back into their tents to sleep.Tian Tian and Gu Shen had decided to visit the third spot later in the night but unknowingly or probably, due to exhaustion both of them fell asleep.In the middle of the night, someone heard someone shouting out loudly. Tian Tian and Gu Shen were sleeping, still they both heard it very clearly.Quickly getting up from the sleep and grabbing there to go bag Tian Tian came out of a tent to see what was happening.As soon as she came out, her heart stopped beating for a moment.At the same moment, Gu Shen also came out of his tent, which
As they both started walking towards the place from where they had entered the top, Gu Shen and Tian Tian were completely thrilled from the bottom of their hearts.As soon as they got down from the bus last night, they had already noticed that they had two mountains in the area. When one of them was the cloud mountain while the other one was the Black mountain. As everyone got down everyone did take a look at both of them and realized that the Black Mountain was not even at 1:10 height of the cloud mountain.Now while going down through the Cloud mountain, when Tian Tian just turned her head, she realized that in front of the top of the cloud mountain, there was another mountain that was pitch dark in color and was much more higher than the one they were standing on.As Tian Tian noticed this discovery, Gu Shen had already figured out something else.Since Gu Shen was walking ahead, to find out a way, as soon as he reached closer to the way of
After Gu Shen and Tian Tian, both got to know that they both were unable to contact their partners or their team members, they both did not stop there. They tried another way to contact them, unfortunately to no avail.After numerous tries, both had to give up trying to contact someone from the outside world. Since at this point, they knew that the place that they were in was already separated from the outside world and would not help them with anything."There are so many ways! Which one to choose?" Tian Tian murmured while she kept on staring at all the five roads that she was able to see in front of her."What is going on? This Violet sky, so many roads, the height difference..." Gu Shen kept on murmuring about all the abnormalities that he and Tian Tian had found till now."Since we can't contact the outside world, it means that this is an isolated space. But why?" Tian Tian and Gu Shen both kept on passing the questions, answers, and assumptions to e
"Think about it. The two mountains beside each other, one standing at the top of the pyramid while another one aesthetically unimportant. One will take you to the clouds, while the other you cannot even be able to look at it. But as sun sets and darkness takes over, everything changes. The one who stood tall in front of the sun was now shrouded in darkness. While the one which was aesthetically unimportant at which you can't even bear to have a look, standing tall high and mighty as it could." Gu Shen patiently explained Tian Tian why he thought that this place was not normal and was under some spell that was strong enough to attack them."Two things differing, at two different times, it cannot be normal. Even if you think about the color of the sky, shouldn't it be colored black or blue but from where does the color appear?" Gu She n threw a question at her allowing her to think about the matter understanding his train of thoughts.Now that Tian Ti
Now that they knew who had caused the mess and was responsible for the curse, things became really easier for both of them. Each God would be given a different specific way and a specific power in which they can control things. Beyond those powers or beyond those things nothing else would be in their control.Now that Tian Tian and Gu Shen realized that water God was the one who caused the place to become like this, they again turned their heads to look at the sky and realized that from the sky little tits and bits of water droplets were falling. It was mainly because of those water droplets that this whole place was wet and shrouded by the course.In the morning, when they came and even at night when they were playing and laughing or enjoying with their teams, there was no water over anywhere thus the mountain was free of the curse.Now that they knew, who caused the curse and might be able to figure out, how to break this curse, they still had to find a way to
Gu Shen and Tian Tian did not waste any moment trying to look here and there and quickly rushed down the mountain. Since they both had Divine Powers, it did not take them more than ten seconds to reach towards the third spot where they had stopped.Now that Gu Shen and Tian Tian were at the third spot, they were completely shocked looking at whatever was there in front of their eyes.As compared to the dry path, that they walked in the morning, the path of the mountain or the place where they were sitting in the morning, was now covered in blood.Apart from the fact that there was a blood bath on the floor, there were a lot of voices coming over from there as well. Loud screeches, giggling's laughter, screaming, shouting, crying there were a plethora of voices coming over.Both Gu Shen and Tian Tian turned their faces to look at each other before they had one single thought running in their minds.'What more are we going to face now?'
Tian Tian turned her head towards Gu Shen, while asking him in a requesting yet pretty much commanding voice, "Would you mind tying up his hands and raising them on the top of his head for 'punishment'!"Tian Tian made sure to highlight the word punishment since she had to make sure that the Water God knows what she is speaking about.Hearing the word punishment, the water god's face turned black and blue before he angrily scolded her, "Punishment! You little girl, do you even know whom you are punishing?" He tried to show his authority which did not work even a little bit on Tian Tian as she simply blinked her eyes before adding, "If you don't tell me why you cursed this place... I might make sure that you, yourself do not recognize who you are!"She threatened him.The threat worked really well coupled with Gu Shen's energy that he used to freeze the hands of water God on top of his head as a first-class student standing in a punishmen
As soon as they questioned the water God about, the reason for him cursing the mountain, his eyes dimmed up while his bold demeanor changed immediately.After the water God was punished by Tian Tian, he understood that there was no way out for him.He's sighed softly as if, all the problems, all the thoughts, that he had been through, were about to come to end.On the other hand, Tian Tian and Gu Shen, both of them were growing extremely impatient with every passing second, since they had really limited time on their hands.Gu Shen hurried him saying, "Be quick, we don't have the whole day."Unexpected to both of them, the water God's eyes which were now dimmed, brightened up while he directed his gaze towards both of them and challenged them, "I will tell you everything... but, you will have to promise me that, you will lift this curse and make this mountain free of the curse."Gu Shen and Tian Tian, both of them turned to loo
The moment old lady spoke those words, a smooth and innocent laughter was heard. This laughter was scary. The old lady’s legs trembled and almost gave up. If not for her stick supporting her she would have already been kissing the ground. "You… Why are you laughing? " The old lady questioned in a trembling voice. This was never good. In fact, whenever she would come out to talk it was never good let alone laughing. Tian Tian was a really important person and most importantly everything right now had happened so abruptly that non
The moment Gu Shen noticed that bright red liquid on his palms his whole facial expression instantly changed.As compared to the smile, relief and mischievousness his face was now clad in darkness and seriousness. He quickly flipped all the clothes on the ground and spread them around.Kneeling down he kept his left hand which was stained with red aside and used only his right hand to look it through the clothes.
On the breakfast table, Gu Shen simply stir fried some frozen dumplings and prepared some orange juice. Apart from that, he also made a plate of fruit and added some veggies to it. A cup of coffee was kept in front of both of them.Even though it seemed like it was nowhere close to breakfast or a hearty breakfast, this was more than enough for both of them who had been tired.
Gu Shen and Tian Tian did not speak anything. She neither said yes nor did she say no. confusion was clearly seen on her face.Gu Shen suddenly frowned.He wondered if living with him was such a big deal for her, where as she had just shared a hotel room with him even though it was separate rooms.Was he such a terrible person in front of her?His hands suddenly clenched into a fist as it dropped from her shoulder.Tian Tian was still busy in wondering, if she would be disturbing Gu Shen with her weird
After Gu Shen and Tian Tian caught the spirit, Tian Tian picked it up in her hands and spoke some words following which she started crushing the big shell in between both of her palms. In no time, the shell had now shrunk into the size of a small tablet. Taking out a small box from her pocket Tian Tian carefully placed the shell into the depression which already was present in the box and secured it firmly with a small belt already attached on the box.
Tian Tian felt excited and almost jumped when she saw that due to Gu Shen's help she was able to catch the spirit. No one else except her knew that how much she would be feeling sad and guilty if she was unable to help out anyone even after seeing the miserable state of everyone.
Tian Tian felt excited and almost jumped when she saw that due to Gu Shen's help she was able to catch the spirit. No one else except her knew that how much she would be feeling sad and guilty if she was unable to help out anyone even after seeing the miserable state of everyone.
Since the maze was already broken, it didn't take long for Gu Shen and Tian Tian to find the door. It in fact did not go inside with the map but it was still there. "Let's open it! " Gu Shen spoke while waiting for Tian Tian to answer.
After having an eye contact with Gu Shen Tian Tian winked towards him following which she turned towards the tiger painting hanging on the wall.A gentle and mischievous smile sat on her lips and her eyes started gleaming with brightness. Folding both of her hands behind at her waist Tian Tian started decreasing the dista