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11: Kicking It Up a Notch!
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2024-10-29 19:42:56T H E L A S T W E E K of March found Carmen walking into an investigation room with soon-to-be detective Brian Pierce, making that her seventh session at the precinct.
She stood next to him and they were looking at a woman seated in the opposite side of the room, through a window.
Carmen noticed how her hands had been cuffed over the table and she had hair that was so dark it was probably dyed from its original vague blond or light brunette. She also had dark eyeliner and a tiny ring popping out from her nostrils, dangling slightly above her lips that looked as if they had been smothered in purple ink, giving her a total Gothic look.
All of this was an analysis by Carmen; observation being her favorite part of what she had been learning at the precinct as an intern.
"So," Carmen began, "what exactly are we looking at?"
"Prudence."
Fabzy SamHello everyone. Next week will be the mid-season finale! No new chapters will be dropping instead, it will be a special chapter,recapping how far the story has gone and what to expect for the second half.
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