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Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-11(part-1)
Warning- Abusive scene ahead. Read at your own risk. Author's povVR & Orni reached his house and he came out of the car. He ordered her to come out but she again scooted away due to fear. VR lost control of his anger and dragged her outside holding her hair. Then, he picked her up on his shoulder like she is a sack of potatoes and started walking inside the house. All the time Orni was apologizing and begging to leave her but he didn't pay any heed to her screaming. Reaching his room, he threw her on the bed and she crawled backwards. Tears were flowing from her eyes nonstop and her body was shaking due to fear. " Vijendra, please let me return to my house. Papa will be worried," Orni requested helplessly to go away from here in any way. VR took her phone and ordered holding it in front of her eyes," Come up with an excuse and tell him that you aren't coming home tonight."" He wil..............." Orni couldn't finish her sentence when VR growled angrily," Do as I say."Orni cou
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-11(part-2)
The Next Day MorningOrni woke up from her sleep feeling some gentle touches over her bruises. She noticed that it was VR who was putting ointments over her bruised asscheeks and burnt skin. She looked at his facial expression and found it neutral. She tried to find guiltiness or even a little bit of sadness in them but found nothing. It's like he isn't affected even an ounce by her condition. This time she became more hurt and shed some tears. Is she angry with him? No, she isn't. She is hurt. Way too much. " You don't have to," Orni mumbled shoving away his hand from her body and VR can feel the sadness in her voice. She tried to stand up with her wobbly legs but hissed in pain. She felt like her whole body is paralyzed. " Lay on the bed and let me apply medicine," VR said softly holding her hands. She answered taking away her hands," I just want to go home. I don't need your fake concern."She felt bee sting like sensations over her right cheek and her face turned in another d
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-12(part-1)
At Night Author's povOrni was lying on her bed and shedding tears silently. It's almost midnight but there is no sleep in her eyes. Her mind was replaying VR's behaviour in front of her eyes and she was hurt beyond level. " I shouldn't have worn such a short dress but still it doesn't give him the right to mistreat me like that. I thought he loves me," She thought with a heavy heart soaking the pillow with her tears. After coming home she took a long shower and scrubbed her body to remove the bruises but it worsen. She was feeling so bad and helpless at that time which she can't describe in words. Having no one to talk with she wore her PJ and went to the bed. She didn't even have her dinner. Sanjay tried hard to feed her but she refused. Orni was still shedding tears when she felt a soft hand over her shoulder. She looked beside her and a smile appeared on her face. " Ma," she called and hugged that woman who came to meet her previously. The woman asked affectionately hugging
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-12(part-2)
Orni just came out of her school and started walking towards her home. She is upset and today was a hectic day for her. Every day VR would drop her home but today she didn't wait for him. She was walking lazily on the road when from nowhere 5/6 people surrounded her. Those people were wearing bear costumes and all of them were holding placards.She became startled by their presence and looked at her surroundings nervously. She noticed their costumes with surprised eyes and became shocked seeing the placards. There was written 'Sorry' on every placard. " Who are you?" She asked them but they didn't respond. Suddenly, a car halted right in front of her and she knew whose car it is. It was none other than VR's car. Seeing the car she tried to leave the place but couldn't as she was surrounded.She looked at the car annoyingly when VR came out of the car. Orni's eyes widened with pure shock noticing his appearance. Her mouth is now hung open seeing him in a bear costume. VR showed a p
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-13
At NightAuthor's povOrni wore a white short dress which were showing half of her boobs. Her hair was open and she did some makeup on her face. She was looking extra sexy in her attire and smiled seeing her reflection in the mirror. She took a mirror selfie and thought to send this to VR. Sending the selfie Orni texted VR," How is the door behind me? 🤭" Door!! Where is it? I only saw my favourite pom pom 🍅🍅. Looking delicious though," VR texted back instantly. Orni giggled and texted," Wanna see these pom poms? Papa is out of the city for one day. I am alone in my house."" 🏃♂️🏃♂️🏃♂️. Open the door," VR texted back and Orni laughed loudly. She asked in the next text," Why? Are you here? Did you use Doraemon's magic door that you reached my house so fast?"" Babe, just open the door," VR texted back and Orni just giggled. Wrapping a shawl around her body she walked towards the door. She looked through the looking glass but no one was there. She thought to go back but sti
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-14(part-1)
The next day morningOrni's povI woke up early in the morning and searched for Vijendra. But, he is nowhere to be seen. Did he leave already? How can he wake up so early? As per as I know he always wakes up very late. I called him but he didn't receive my calls. I texted him but he didn't reply. I am not understanding what happened to him suddenly? Is he angry? But, why? Everything was great last night then what happened suddenly. I didn't think any more and sat at the table to study. I will go to meet him in the afternoon and ask him why he is ignoring me. Sometimes his behaviour is too much. I tried to concentrate on study but couldn't. Only his thoughts were occupying my mind. I giggled remembering about last night and his art on my whole face. I am sure he has taken pictures of my face with those funny words. I know he is very short-tempered and sometimes really rude. But, I love him a lot. The way he loves me pampers me and take care of me. I don't think someone else will lo
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-14(part-2)
Warning- Abusive scene ahead. Author's povFisting Orni's hair VR whispered in her ear dangerously," Bitch!! What did you think I won't come to know about your double-timing."" Ahh.....leave. Double timing? What are you talking about?" Orni asked hissing in pain because his hold around her hair was too tight. A harsh slap landed on Orni's face and she fell to the ground. Touching her throbbing cheek she looked at VR with teary eyes and found him looking at her with fuming eyes. He was looking like a raging bull who is ready to march towards her. VR screamed at the top of his lungs," Pratik Khandelwal. Isn't it this bastard's name? Huh!! I have seen your flirty chatting with him. Didn't you feel ashamed before sharing double meaning jokes with him?"Orni's eyes widened with shock and she nodded her head vigorously. She tried to say something but looking at his dark eyes she couldn't utter a single word. She crawled backwards due to fear. " Why do you betray me?" VR yelled at her a
Last Updated : 2023-06-08Orni- An innocent angel Chapter-15(part-1)
Author's povOrni is sitting on the bed inside her room and crying nonstop. VR's barbaric behaviour was flashing in front of her continuously and her heart was shattering every time. She looked at her bandaged fingers and burst into more tears. Thanks to God that her fingers weren't broken completely. Her fingers were fractured. The doctor told that she will recover soon. " We don't hurt the person whom we love," Orni mumbled touching her swollen cheeks. Her subconscious said," Everything is your fault. You shouldn't agree with Natasha."" I apologized to him but still he hurt me like that," Orni opposed biting her lips to control her sobbing. Her subconscious taunted her," If you loved him truly then you shouldn't have........."Orni was still quarrelling with her subconscious when she heard her father's voice from the dining room. She looked at the door and thought for some time.She thought about VR's behaviour and decided to tell everything to her father. She can't endure ever
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Orni- An innocent angel Alternative Epilogue
Author's povIt was a normal day in Patel household. VR was reading a newspaper sitting in the living room and taking sips from his morning tea. Sanjay and Srilekha had gone for a walk while Orni was busy reading a religious holy book.Roman and Rion came out of their room before Orni could deliver her lecture to them. They are already bored by their teacher's lectures so they don't need extras. They know if they wake up late then their mother will lecture them the whole day. " Good morning, Dad," Roman said letting out a big yawn. Rion said shortly," Morning."" Morning, chams. I need to talk to you," VR told the boys who didn't look that much interested in VR's words. They knew he will surely start talking about their studies. It's been months since VR started living with Orni. It did not take a lot of time for Sanjay and Srilekha to accept VR. In front of their daughter's happiness, they gave up. The same thing happened with Shivansh. He had to accept VR for Orni's happiness. Th
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Author's pov Sitting in the garden VR was reading a newspaper. His eyes were stuck on those black alphabets but his mind was stuck somewhere else. He was thinking about all the chaos that was created by his arrival. It's been two weeks since he started living with Orni. Since his arrival nothing was going right in Orni's house. Though Orni and the boys were acting pretty normal with VR Orni's parents were extremely upset and angry with Orni. Shivansh also came to know about VR and since then he stopped talking to Orni. Shivansh knew that VR will try to meet Neela so he threatened Orni if VR meets Neela then Shivansh will cut all of his ties with Orni. VR was becoming impatient to meet Neela but Orni convinced him that once Shivansh calm down they will go to meet Neela. Orni knew that today or tomorrow her parents and Shivansh will accept her decision. It was just a matter of time. VR's concentration was broken by a presence behind him. He turned his head behind thinking that the p
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Author's pov" This is impossible. I can't let him stay with you," Srilekha yelled at Orni.Sanjay rubbed his forehead," I can't believe even after all these years you couldn't forget him." A few moments ago Orni's parents returned him. It isn't necessary to describe what kind of shock they got after seeing VR in the house. Apart from shock, they were angry at Orni for letting a criminal enter the house. " I can't even breathe the same air as him. He reminds me of Indrajit," Srilekha made a foul face while taking Indrajit's name. Orni snapped at her mother," Don't compare him with Indrajit, Ma. Indrajit never felt remorse for whatever he did. He didn't suffer enough for his sins."" But, Vijendra is not like his father. He didn't deny that he committed many heinous sins. He accepted his punishment. He did every single thing to earn my forgiveness. He saved my life when I was struggling in the hospital bed," Orni's facial expression turned emotional. Srilekha reminded Orni," You ki
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15 years laterAuthor's pov" Roman, bring the clothes from the terrace," Orni said loudly taking a look at the sky through the kitchen window. " It's going to rain," Orni mumbled noticing the black clouds floating in the sky.Letting out a sigh she concentrated on her cooking. She was cooking some favourite dishes of her sons and her parents. She was preparing them for Navarati( A Hindu festival ). " Hmm... this is so tasty," Rion moaned putting a laddu inside his mouth.Orni slapped his arm," Hey, don't eat it now. It's for the festival night."" Another one Mumma," Rion giggled before snatching another laddu from the plate. He laughed at his mother's annoyed face.Fifteen years have passed since Orni's last encounter with her past who is none other than VR. She is in her late 30s and her children are teenagers now. Orni didn't know how the time has flown away so fast. Over time, she has moved on in her life. She was firm in her decision that she will never marry. Her parents tried
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Three years laterAuthor's pov" Mumma, this is so good," Rion said taking a bite from his burger. " Can I have another one, please?" he requested. Orni denied," No. We are going to have veggies and rice at home. Fast foods are not good for our health." She tried to convince him. Making a sad face he diverted his concentration on his burger. He doesn't know why his mother is so strict about their diets. She doesn't let them eat all those tasty street foods and fast foods. He doesn't know what is wrong with eating such food. Orni diverted her eyes at Roman who was eating his fries silently. She noticed him watching somewhere else. His concentration was somewhere else. She followed his eyes. Her eyes got stuck on a family. She noticed a pair of twin boys with their parents. Orni noticed how Roman was looking at the father with his sad longing eyes. The way that father was treating his sons with so much affection, Roman wished his father was with them. " Mumma, are all the fathers g
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Author's pov" Don't be nervous, baby. Ma and Papa are here," Srilekha patted Orni's hair who was laying on the hospital bed. She smiled at her parents. Her father kissed her knuckles gently while her mother wiped away her emotional tears." Mumma, I will be praying for you to God," Roman hugged his mother tightly.Orni kissed his forehead," My sweet baccha(baby)."" Mumma, Please come back soon," Rion requested her. She kissed his tiny fingers affectionately. Their emotional moment was interrupted by the doctors, nurses and Shivansh. They came here to take Orni to the operation theatre. The nurses shifted her to a stretcher. " Don't be scared," Shivansh said. " We all are here for you," he assured her patting her head gently. Orni smiled," I have faced worst than this."Shivansh's face got clouded with sudden sadness. He knew what she meant. Having an awkward smile he caressed the back of her hand. " I will be back, bhaiya," Orni let out a dry smile. The doctors and the nurses
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Author's pov" Everything happened because of you," Shivansh punched VR the moment his eyes caught VR's face.Before VR could recover from the previous punch another one landed just across his nose," You ruined her life. Because of you, she is now struggling for her life."Shivansh was ready to punch VR for the third time but a constable stopped him. Gritting his teeth Shivnash controlled his anger somehow. His hands were itching to beat the hell out of VR for whatever he did to Orni.When Akash informed Shivansh that VR wants to meet him, he agreed without any fuss because he wanted to confront VR again. He wanted to ask VR what Orni did to him that he abused her like she was some kind of animal. How could someone be that heartless to harm an innocent soul like Orni." What wrong she did to you, huh!" Shivansh screamed. " Because of you she is now in death bed." VR lowered his eyes due to shame. He regretted whatever he did to her. He wished he could go back in time and fix everythi
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Note- The medical things described here are completely fictional. It's a request to not compare it with real life and leave awful comments. Thanks. Two years laterAuthor's pov" Orni, breakfast is ready. Don't be late, beta(dear)," Srilekha called Orni who was brushing her hair looking at the mirror. It seemed like she was lost somewhere.Srilekha called again," Orni."Orni jumped a little bit when Srilekha's words reached her ears. She replied," Coming, Ma."Entering the dining space she found her father already seated at the breakfast table with her sons. Both of them were wearing school uniforms and looking adorable. They smiled at her while munching on their toasts. She took a seat beside them while patting their heads affectionately." Eat properly, Orni. Look how much weight you have lost," Sanjay said serving toast and poached egg on Orni's plate. Orni took a look at herself and indeed she has lost weight. She was looking different than before specifically her eyes and skin
Orni- An innocent angel Epilogue
VR's povComing out of my room I found choti ma ordering the maids to clean the house and change all the bed sheets and pillow covers. Today is Diwali and there was a festive vibe in the whole house. Choti ma is looking so happy today. Why won't she? After all her daughter and son-in-law are coming to celebrate with her. That's where my heart aches. One part of mine is happy that I will get to see Orni and the boys. Along with Neela. Shivansh and Niyati are invited too. Another part of mine will be shattered seeing Orni with her husband. It feels terrible whenever I see her with that man. I deserve all this. That's my punishment for ruining her life. She deserves all the happiness. I tried a lot to make her fall in love with me again but perhaps I forgot that love can't be forced. And, the way I disrespected her parents. It's my luck that even after all this Choti ma allowed me to live with her. Mr Patel doesn't seem happy because of my presence but looking at choti ma he doesn't sa
