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The knife hit me in my leg. I fell backwards and I couldn't breathe anymore. Blood was gushing out my leg, my neck was black and blue because of Ryan his hand and my spine got hit so many times, I don't know if I had broken my back. I wanted to drift off and forget the pain. I didn't want to be here anymore. But then I heard Tris scream. I tilted my heavy head and saw Ryan between her legs. Her dress had ridden up and he pushed her down with his entire body. She was fighting, beating around her with frantic movements but it didn't help. It was like he didn't even feel it. He was saying things but I didn't hear it, a loud peep resounding in my head. Then suddenly he brought his face down to her neck and she screamed. A scream full of pain and hopelessness. A sort of strength came over me. My last momentum of being clear. He was going to kill Tris and I couldn't let that happen. I stood up, my body protesting but my mind clearer than ever. I removed the knife from my leg, blood rushing
“Jane. Thank you. You saved her life. I owe you more than anything I could ever give you.” He said with a serious expression. I could see rage was still going through his entire being and that he was trying to calm down. I looked back at my best friend, a peaceful expression on her face. “No, I think you saved her life. I'm pretty sure she was dying.” I softly said. “I felt pain. I thought it was my own, but it was hers. I should've known.” Damon responded with a guilty voice. “Look, I have no idea what that means. You are not human, that's all I know at this point. And Ryan or Alexander or whatever his name is, is also not. And right now I'm too fucked up to even care.” I said back. He steered the car right into a long driveway. A beautiful house came into view. There was greenery everywhere and the house itself was massive. A small mansion. “You live here!?” I said with a gasp. “Yup. Welcome in.” Damon said and he parked up the car. “Will you be alright walking in?” He asked me. I
I laid in bed on my back with two strong arms around me, a cool body pressed against me and the most amazing smell surrounding me. Cinnamon. Memories of yesterday came flooding in and I opened my eyes, taking in my location. I stared at the ceiling and needed a moment to comprehend what was happening. I looked next to me to Jane who was stirring awake. She was laying against me, her arm draped over me, the back of her hand pressed against Damon his chest.Moose was down by her feet, taking up half of the bed. He was laying like a starfish on his back and pushed the three of us to the other side of the bed. I looked to my other side and saw Damon, fully pressed against me with his leg over me. His one arm was under my neck and his other arm was holding the side of my body. His head was resting above my head and I laid safe and secure in the nook of his neck. Oh my god. I was in bed with Damon Hayes.“I'm going to have a shower. Be right back.” Jane whispered to me once she saw I was aw
The doorbell rang and Moose started barking, jumping up and down by the window. Damon went to the door and got the breakfast that was finally delivered. He walked back with three bags. We stood up to help but he shook his head, signalling for us to stay seated. “Let us help. It's too much on your own. You'll be taking ages.” I said to him. Damon laughed. “Want to see some real speed?” he said. Before I could respond, a whirlwind of movement happened around us. Suddenly the kitchen island was stacked with food. Pancakes, eggs cooked every way, toast, fruit, bagels, cut up cheese and meats, cereal, sweet cakes, pretzels, sausages, hash browns, beans and different kind of juices and smoothies.Jane and I were star struck and looked at the table in a daze. “That's not cool man. I thought I was imagining this shit yesterday.” Jane said while putting her head in her hands. “Jane, with all that happened yesterday, you're mentally stronger than you think. I said I would do everything in my po
“Do you mind if I have a bath?“ Tris asked me.With me? Maybe we can continue what we started this morning. And I can keep you safe.“Of course,“ I said instead. I stepped forward to walk her up but she jumped off the stool. “Don't worry, I know where it is,“ she said and walked out. I felt a twinge of disappointment but that vanished when I watched her walk out. She was in my house, safe and sound. And hopefully she would be sleeping in my bed again tonight.“You feel better now? Maybe you need a snickers?” Jane asked me in a joking tone. I flipped her off. “I have decided not to let Tris leave my eyesight or my house until Alexander is dead. Problem solved. He will get what's coming to him.” I said. Jane raised an eyebrow. ‘‘That seems highly not executable. What's this -very- unhealthy obsession with Tris, if I may ask?” She asked.I looked at the door and hesitated. “This is a conversation I wanted to have alone with Tris. It's a weird phenomenon with my kind. But since you are al
I had one of the best pizza's of my life. This man didn't eat but man he did know where to get food from. After vacuum cleaning all the feathers, the pizza arrived and we settled in. The tea was flowing for me and Damon was drinking double and triple Whiskeys the same speed as I was drinking my tea. Jane was slowing down on her drink, laughing at every typical thing Dracula did and asking Damon if he did the same.“Do you have exceptional swordsmanship?”“Can you shapeshift?”“How come you don't burn to a crisp in the sun?”“Can you control the weather?”“Can you control fire?”“Can you touch silver?”“Are you going to die if we stab you with a wooden stake?”At every single question, Damon sighed again. Apparently he could do none of the above and walking in the sun was just something made up to make humans feel more safe who had a strong idea they existed. “You suck as a vampire,” Jane said while putting her head down on the couch. Damon groaned and put his head on my shoulder which
I woke up to someone kissing my cheek. “Wake up my favourite student. Time for university.” Damon whispered to me. I groaned and tried to turn away, not ready for this day yet. Damon laughed and pulled me towards him in the bed, kissing my cheek again. “Not while I'm in the same bed you pervert,” Jane groaned, cracking open an eye. “Time for school, ladies!” Damon shouted and we both grabbed the blanket and pulled it over our heads.After some complaining we walked downstairs, still in our pyjamas and we walked outside. We were going to my place to shower and get dressed. Damon was already waiting for us against the side of his car and I took the outside of his house in, my eyes widening. He stood against his Maserati and next to the Maserati was a red Ferrari Roma. He was already in his work clothes, wearing a white dress shirt and dark blue trousers. A large garden surrounded his house, the grass bright green and a few trees for perfect shading. “How long have you lived here?” I ask
I put my phone back into my bag, my breath catching and I hooked my arm into Logan's, happy that life was returning to normal. “Do you guys know where the teachers' lounge is?” A voice asked us from behind. We twirled around and a beautiful woman stood before us. Long blonde hair cascaded down her back and she was wearing a tight fitted red dress which accentuated all her features. She had a perfect body, her hips curving into a small waist and boobs big enough for some students to stop and watch her. Her nails were painted blood red, matching her lipstick. Logan quickly let go of me and started stammering.“Why.. Who.. Who do you need to see?” Logan finally managed. “Elise,” I heard an all too familiar voice say behind us. She smiled in his direction and looked at Logan. “Found him, thank you.” She said with a seductive voice, putting a hand on Logan's shoulder. Logan visibly tensed and gave a half nod.She walked in between Logan and I with a smirk and walked towards Damon, her hips
We heard Logan screaming from the upper floor. I bolted down the stairs towards his pained screams but before I could open the door, Damon grabbed my wrist and held me back. “Tris. You don't want to see this. Don't go in.” He said to me.“You're joking right? Of course I'm going in.” I said stubbornly and I went inside with Jane and Kenna by my side.In the corner, laying flat on his back, lay a screaming Logan. Screams full of pain, terror and agony. “Logan.” I said but he didn't hear us and the screaming continued. Tears sprang into my eyes. Kenna started sobbing and Jane just stared at him with fear.“Logan,” I said again and I walked towards him, ignoring Damon's protests. I knelt beside him and put my hand on his arm. Heat penetrated through his shirt. “He's burning.” I said as a statement but nobody came forward to help. “What can we do?” I asked the group as I turned my head around. Damon, Keddrick and who I thought was Emrys stood by the door, looking at Logan with hooded face
“Did he touch you?”Damon asked in a whisper. I looked up into his eyes. He waited again for my answer. I hesitated again, giving him an answer.The fire in the fireplace suddenly exploded, raining ash everywhere. Jane screamed and ducked down, protecting her face and body from the heat. Michael turned to the fireplace in alarm but then looked at Damon again with big eyes. Damon still looked at me with his fingers on my face, a stone expression on his face and not fazed by the fire behind him. He stared into my eyes. Michael stepped forward, touching his shoulder. His hand suddenly lit on fire and he let out a scream and released Damon in an instant. “Damon! Control yourself!” Michael shouted, looking around at the spreading flames.“What is happening!?” I asked no one in particular. I didn't think I would get an answer from Damon, he looked far away in his mind.Michael looked dumbfounded for a moment. He looked at me, where his fingers touched my skin and his mouth opened to answer m
I was blasted by memories. Memories of my father when I was a little girl. Six years of my life clicked back into the empty spaces of my head. Making sandcastles on the beach, baking pies, walking the dog, moving house, brushing my teeth with music playing in the background, singing songs in the car, playing in the playground and watching movies on the couch till I fell asleep. All the memories that I made with the man in front of me who still looked exactly the same.I looked at Michael with pain in my eyes. But then other memories surfaced, memories that I made with Alex. Things he had done to me, he had shown me. All lies and deceit.“I'm going to ask you again. Is Alexander Hudson your blood mate?” My father asked me but before my lips opened, a hand snaked around my neck and pulled me backwards. A snarl left Michael but Alex took me back further. A sharp tip touched my side and pierced my dress. A gasp left me and I tried to get away but Alex held me tighter.“One wrong move and
All I felt was despair as Alex turned me towards him, grabbed the back of my neck and pushed his lips onto mine. Disgust filled me and I tried to push him away but I couldn't. My body was frozen. All I could do was stand there as Alex forcefully pulled me against him. His lips moved against mine and his other hand encircled my waist painfully tight. He pulled his face back and looked at me. He gave me another feather light kiss. I stared into his eyes, making my feelings very obvious. “You can't fight me any longer, my dear toy. Nobody will ever be able to save you now.” He whispered very softly. That was right before the doors of the ballroom blasted open with a loud Bang. The entire crowd, including me and Alex, turned towards the source of the sound. Damon. Damon stood in the door opening, two knives protruding from his chest. Blood covered his chest, dripping on the ballroom floor. There was a head wound on the side of his face. Keddrick and two other guys were next to him. The
A vampire woman with long black hair and a white dress entered the stage. “Silence!” She hushed the crowd. She said it in a normal tone but her voice boomed through the ballroom, demanding attention. “Another one of us has found their blood mate.” She continued and whispers went through the crowd. I stared at Alex and he looked back at me, not breaking eye contact. He was wearing a dark blue suit and his light brown hair was styled back. He stepped closer to me, running his fingers over my neck in front of the crowd. Shivers ran down my body. “It is Alexander Hudson who has found his mate, one of the contenders to take over the crown.” The woman said and gasps ran through the crowd. I looked up, finding everybody staring at us. I still couldn't locate Damon. Where was he? The crowd started to blur in front of me and it was the tears in my eyes that caused it. I blinked them away. Logan and Kenna stared at me and I pleaded with them in my mind. They looked from me to Jane with terrif
‘‘But I immediately noticed you as soon as you stepped through my doors tonight. You're my daughter. Your mate Alexander will become the prince, and next in line, once he has claimed you tonight.’’ He talked further but I shut my mind off. I was absolutely sick and tired of everybody compelling my thoughts, my memories and my head. I was a person, not some toy. From the moment I was a child, compulsion lay on my mind, compelling me to forget my own father and my emotions were stashed away and not validated. It was easy for this man, just compel the humans, your own children, and don't look back. I was absolutely seething with anger. I turned back to the table, downed the rest of the whiskey or whatever it was without a hitch, and stepped past Michael, who stopped talking when I turned around. ‘‘Beatrice?’’ He asked me and I didn't answer, instead walking to the door. ‘‘Don't leave.’’ He said and it almost sounded pleading. I turned around. ‘‘Or what? You're going to compel me to stay?
I stayed moving and focused on calming down. About a thousand thoughts ran through my mind and I still felt the compulsion Alex put on me weighing me down. “What do you want?” I said in a steady voice and I felt him smile. “Alexander came to me earlier this evening. Told me something interesting about you. It seems like you're already taken. You have an interesting life ahead of you as Alexander's mate.” He said and I froze. My body kept moving with him but I looked around for Damon or Jane, hoping they could get me away right now. Instead I looked straight into the eyes of Alex. My heart stopped for a second. He looked at me, an evil smile on his face and he put his finger in front of his lips, motioning for me to stay silent. I swallowed heavily. My fingers tightened on Michael's shoulder and he turned me around, facing me away from Alex. He made me do a twirl and then caught me again, taking me to the edge of the dancefloor. “Come with me.” Michael said with authority and I looked
As soon as Kenna and Logan saw us, I was swept away in the arms of Logan in the form of a big hug. “You daredevil. Keddrick told us Damon compelled you to stay at home. He should've known better.” He said in my ear and I smiled. “I wasn't going to let you fight this alone. We are in this together. We all are.” I responded and that was true, I wasn't going to abandon them. While I couldn't tell them about what exactly happened, I still pulled Logan closer to me. “I need your help tonight.” I quickly whispered to him. He nodded and then let me go, looking away as if we didn't speak at all. He gave me a wink before turning around to the rest of the group. Kenna stood next to me and touched my arm. “I'm happy you guys are here. It was a bit nerve wrecking.” Kenna said with a nervous smile and I grabbed her arm, pulling her towards me for a half hug.My mood instantly turned sour when I heard a loud, flirtatious voice next to me. “It's starting, Damon. So exciting.” Elise said and I turne
Mania by Aaryan Shah was playing when we walked in, the whole party set in a sensual but clubby tone. I was blasted by a lot of sights. It looked like a club, the walls red and the lights dimmed. Apparently they dimmed the lights more as the night went on, raising the anticipation for hunting the pets once the doors locked. I stood in the doorway with Jane, us both gasping at the grand place. Gold statues adorned the floor, paintings of people hung all over the place and the ceiling was painted with art of naked women and men. There were hundreds of people, dancing, drinking, eating and talking.Most people were dressed in their best outfit, women wearing ball gowns and men wearing their best suits. Waiters walked around with different drinks and food and I spotted several humans with barely any clothes on, covered in puncture wounds. I saw some humans with grand dresses on as well, their cheeks already reddening by the alcohol and other activities. It looked pretty tame so far, disc