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Madrid UN REENCUENTRO BIEN CALIENTE
AlanaAs soon as I hung up the phone, a feeling of emptiness washed over me. I lied to Raúl, I didn't tell him the real reason, and it's eating me up. When I found him again I had no idea he could leave me like this, feel involved, make me feel so good. At first I didn't really feel anything different for him, he was just Dani's friend, who always liked me, and I didn't realize it, until he was conquering space, and even knowing and feeling that, I still act like that stupid girl who I thought I liked the half brother. I spent the night lying in bed, thinking and feeling bad for not having spent the night with him. I know, I'm confused, too dreamy, and I ended up idealizing something that didn't exist! Making love to Raúl was good, he caused me so many things that I never felt... Why didn't I go to sleep with him? Now, I'm feeling like I should be with him.I'm going to meet my friends, and I already know they'll ask why I didn't say what I wanted, and now I'm sorry. I feel bad, and I
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid UN REENCUENTRO BIEN CALIENTE PART II
AlanaI'm delivered. My body ignites with every touch, kiss, sensation caused by him. Raúl stops his caresses, takes me by the waist, looks at me intensely and he doesn't have to say anything. I understand his message and lie under the bed. He gets up and looks for something on the table next to the bed, and as soon as he finds the silver wrapper, he closes the drawer, looks at me and smiles. The most beautiful smile I've ever seen. I know, it may seem like I'm behaving like a fool in love, in fact I'm behaving like one! He lies under me, caresses my cheek and takes my mouth hotly, and just when I think we're moving forward, he stops, looks at me, and says something that only makes me more in love with him.— I want you to be honest with me, and when you feel pain, or some discomfort you have to tell me, the pleasure has to be ours, not just mine. How are you? I nod in agreement, and answer.I don't expect you to take my lips, I do it myself with pleasure. Raúl squeezes my thigh, and
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid ¡USTED NO CONSIGUE RESISTIR A MI!
Raúl The day started in an incredible way. I returned home after a wonderful achievement, I was finally called up to the national team, my girlfriend made a statement to me, and we had a wonderful time. Yeah... Life is smiling at me, my heart is light, and I hope things keep flowing that way. After intense moments, it was time to talk to Alana's family, specifically her mother. I understand the concern, but at the same time I think it's exaggerated, they've known me for so long, they know my character and they act like they don't. As soon as I pull up in front of the house, I feel the tension that envelops Alana. I touch her face lightly, she looks at me tenderly. We don't say anything, our looks answer for everything we could say at that moment. As soon as we enter, she squeezes my hand tightly and leads me to the living room where some familiar voices were coming from, we arrive in front of everyone and the sound stops, I feel Alana's hand sweating next to mine. Everyone looks, and
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid YO QUIERO PROVOCAR
AlanaDefinitely, Raúl doesn't know who he's dealing with. Does he want to play, tease me, drive me crazy? So let's start playing, but I'm not the one who's going to lose this game. He didn't want to leave the house, and I insisted we go to the club, and now, in his car, he doesn't look too pleased with our late night show, especially when he saw me in the dress I'm wearing. In his words “Don't you think this dress is quite... Provocative?” I did not agree, although in my heart I know that this is the intention, to provoke him. He didn't ask me to take off the dress, and even if he did I wouldn't for two reasons:– I really want to tease him;– I don't want him to determine what I should or shouldn't wear;I've always believed that we shouldn't let one person run our lives, determine our choices, what to wear, or what we like to do. Analyzing my mother and her marriage to my father, I remember that this was one of the reasons that separated them, he wanted to determine her choices, an
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid YO QUIERO PROVOCAR Part II
Alana— Why are you wasting your time with that girl?Is that the sentence she says about me? Who does she think she is? Since when is she the ideal woman for Raúl, as she seems more interested in the life he can provide than actually living with him? Oh, spare me your...— He's not wasting time, honey! Maybe he's wasting his precious time talking to you, don't you think? I say, and approach Raúl, who looks at me in surprise.— I... — Before she says a word, I take the lead.— Look... Amalia! I think you better look for your class elsewhere!— You act like Raúl is your property, did you buy him? She has the nerve to say it in a mocking tone.— I didn't buy him, he's my boyfriend!— And he can't have my friendship? — she's not mocking... She's just being mocking!— It's not his friendship you want! — and before he answers, Raúl takes the lead.— Amália, I think I was clear with you, but you keep insisting. And now you want to pick a fight with my girlfriend, make us uncomfortable, is t
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid DÍAS INCREÍBLES EN IBIZA
RaúlAlana is always a box of surprises, she spent the whole night teasing me, and when I decide to play her game, she wants to redeem herself, and make love to me. She has the gift of driving me crazy, and then she comes all sly, it's hard… This girl will still be my downfall! I hold her by the waist, turn her on her side. After putting on the condom, I get between her legs and fit inside her. I was crazy about it, it hasn't been that long since we had sex and I feel a crazy need, before it was easier to control. With each thrust she presses her legs around me, and her moan is a little desperate, I squeeze her breasts and kiss her mouth, I feel the orgasm approaching, and I want it to last. She feels the same way too.— Raúl, I'm going to enjoy it ! But I don't want it now, I want more! I obey her, get out of her, get on my knees on the bed, she's panting, and her look makes me crazier. — What are we going to do now?I look at my girlfriend, and there is a desire at that moment to fe
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid DÍAS INCREÍBLES EN IBIZA Part II
Alana— Raúl , did something happen?— It's just that Fernando called, and said so much about the selection, about sponsors, the Tournament, and that made me a little worried...— With what?— I don't know if I'll actually be able to get summoned, and it worries me somehow...— Fernando has been pressuring you, is that it? Because if that's it, do your job and things will happen...— I'm not like Dani. He doesn't bow his head to anyone in football, and he ignores the press, and he's never had to put himself out there to get noticed, and...— Raúl, you have been called up to be tested, and the final list will come out in May, until then he will make two more calls, and you will have until the end of the season to show your potential.— I know, but Fernando told me that it would be nice to appear on some sports programs, and give an interview telling me about my story... It's something he's been insisting on since the event with Pedro, but I don't want to be involved with the sports med
Last Updated : 2022-07-05Madrid DÍAS INCREÍBLES EN IBIZA Part III
RaúlAlana is so worried about her friend that she doesn't feel safe telling him about their possible romance. Since Rafael confided something I already suspected, I started to admire him even more, because it must not be easy to live in a world that doesn't accept you, and in the world of football it's like that. Rafael, or any player who is brave enough to admit his sexual orientation, will suffer the consequences of his decision. Unfortunately, that's how it is, it's outdated, it's not just in football, or in any other sport, the world is still a place full of prejudices. I bring my hand to her face, I want to cherish her, make her feel confident and expose her problems and feelings.— What happened? The problem is with Edu?— Yeah... But, I can't tell you... Because I would be breaking his trust, even though Edu is hiding something from me...— Is he dating a football player?— I think so, but I'm not really sure, and...— Is it Raphael? I ask her, but I already know her answer.—
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RaúlSince the day we won the title, these last few days have been crazy. I won the title of best defender in the competition alongside Valdéz , many contracts with companies emerged, interviews on various programs, celebrations, there is a lot happening at the same time in my professional life. My personal life, or rather my love life, seems stagnant, I couldn't talk to Alana after winning the title. I need to find her and I think I know the ideal time for that, because even if she's upset, she'll go to the commemoration promoted by the Spanish Football Federation.I arrive at the party practically on time, and I am informed by one of the organizers of the event that the tributes to the Selection would begin in a few minutes. I look around the room and spot her. She is beautiful, with a black dress that highlights her beautiful curves very well and a discreet neckline that leaves the bosom of her breasts a little exposed, and that makes me a little on. Dani approaches my table, waves
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AlanaI knew she wasn't a good person, but not of that quality. It's too audacious to hold my arm, think you can say or do anything to me. I try to free myself and turn to face her. Before I open my mouth to speak, or raise my hand to do anything, someone approaches me and says something.— Leave my friend alone, you cow! Who do you think you are to pull her like that?— And who are you? Her security? he asks ironically.— No, I'm her friend. And I think you better get out of here, because if Alana is controlling herself not to put her hand in your face, I'll do it for her... — Edu speaks in a serious tone of voice, which I don't remember seeing him using since we met.— Don't worry, we're leaving! she says, and finally leaves with her friend.I see them walk away. I look at my friends who stare at me with an affectionate look. And Babi questions Edu ironically.— Since when are you so manly? I even believed...— Oh, how dull, Dona Barbara! I had to defend our friend from this crazy
