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2024-10-29 19:42:56When I got home last night, Mary Sue talked to my sister Melissa in our living room. Even though it was awkward, Mary Sue still invited me to her sister's birthday. Knowing Heather, her birthday party is going to be loud and wild. That's the big difference between her and Mary Sue.
They are like the north and the south pole. Very much different from one another. While Heather is the liberated, wild daughter, Mary Sue is the sweet and innocent one. Even when we were younger, Heather would always be involved in some catfights. I can still remember that day when Heather broke Gertha's nose.
Though it's not her fault because Gertha was bullying her, still, in a town like Burton Grove, women were not supposed to be violent. They were supposed to be proper ladies, well-mannered. The thing is, Heather is not that kind of lady.
"Chris! Oliver's here. It looks like an emergency." I heard Melissa's voice coming from the stairs. I finished fixing myself and ran down to the
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Third murder victim, still zero concrete lead, and a whole town out gunning for our blood. The situation got worst and worst. Now, there are three families demanding justice.I've talked to every informant I have, I have looked to every convicted criminal file. Even those who were released early because of parole. But none of them fits the description of the suspect. We can't even tell if that man was a local.Sunday was supposed to be my off, but I can't stop working. Not until we found Mildred. Oliver almost passed out yesterday while we were scoping Theodore's house. He hasn't slept for two days since that third murder victim was found."Chris, breakfast. Come on down."I heard Melissa's voice downstairs. Damn, it's 5:30. I almost forgot about the mass. Guess I have to go down now."Hey, bro. What's wrong? You looked wrecked." Mark asked me. Dad and mom are both staring at me too."No, it's nothing." I simply said."This about the
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I just arrived at the station when we received a call for backup. Apparently, there's been an assault on a police officer. The situation is getting worst and worst. The longer they don't have a solid lead on the murder cases, the townspeople get angrier."Come on, boys."Oliver asked me not to go with the response team. He insisted that finding Mildred and the serial killer is more important. I sighed when I realized that his right. We still don't have the search warrant because we don't have the approval yet.That only aggravated Oliver even more. Because of the information he gathered about Theodore Burnett, his mind was made up that he is the best suspect. He can't argue with him because he also has the same thought."Look at this man." Oliver showed me the sewage plan of Burton Grove."What about it?""This is Theodore's house. Look at this. That means there's a basement under his house. Just like ours and yours."I looked at the
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