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36 - First Impression
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2024-10-29 19:42:56~Derek’s Point of View~
I really never took time off, but I was taking four days off to go meet Eve’s family. It wasn’t the best time for me to be away, but I guessed until my plan went through there wouldn’t be a good time.
Things were going so well with Eve and I, as I knew it would. She was really somehow making me lighter, making me enjoy life.
I’d been so hell bent on revenge for so long, on busting my ass to get this whole scheme to work, it was my entire life. I wasn’t looking for someone, but one day at lunch Haven just wouldn’t shut up about this girl.Now that I had Eve, she was mine, I was incredibly possessive of her. Either I was with her, or Heath was with her 24/7.
I trusted Heath because I knew his type, he had a thing for redheads, and he said right away that Eve reminded him of his sister but I didn’t
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