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Author's POV "Now, be ready to get your best fuck from me! Eva!" Mark's voice turned husky as his eyes focused on her flushing face whose eyes were already concentrating on him with a heavy breath. She was lying on her back and looking at him with a desired gaze. His lips curled up slightly as he adjusted his manhood between her vagina center, while his hands captured her thighs tightly between his grips to push his whole dick in one go inside her. Eva's body trembled completely to his sudden thrusts and her hand wrapped around his neck, legs on his waist. He shoved her pussy with fast speed without any mercy. Without even giving her a chance to adjust to his size. "Ahhh…ahhh…" Her eyes got tears as her body shivered to feel something huge go inside tearing her pussy. While the moan turned out louder and shaky as he is using his all power to fuck her and dig her hole. His shoves turned harder with every passing second as their body slapping sound filled the air with hotness.
Eva's POV "Good Morning, Babe!" Mark kissed my forehead as soon as I opened my eyes, hazing. "Good morning, Mark." I smiled back at him. We are still naked between each other's arms wrapped in the duvet. "So, do you want to join me in the shower?" His eyes looked at me teasingly while his hands wrapped around my waist. I met his sexy eyes and bit my lower lips seductively. Before finally nodding to him and commenting, "If you are ready, take me in your lap because I'm still feeling sore down there." Hearing my words he immediately chuckled and got closer to me, smooching my lips tenderly and looking into my eyes. "Yes, my queen. I would love to do that for my whole day." His words made my heart flutter but I know. It's just a word because we are just bedmates. But soon I shook my thought and teasingly asked, "Really?" my finger started drawing imaginably circled on his broad chest. Mark grinned while he claimed, "Yeah, why not! This way I can keep buried my little monste
Eva's POV "You don't need to send me to college." I looked at Mark who was already ready with his office bag to go to the office but now insisted on sending me to college first. "But I'll." He looked at me with determination and took my backpack from my shoulder to his hand. "Mark!" I annoyedly shouted. Because I don't want my friends to meet Mark or see him by any chance. Not after our deal. He smiled slyly and moved towards the main door without caring about my shout. I rolled my eyes to feel he is turning stubborn. "Now, start walking, Eva! I'm not dropping your bag alone to college." He teasingly said. "Yeah! Yeah! I got it!" I mockingly said and started following him behind. Mark went to his driver's seat while I took the passenger seat comfortably. As soon as he starts the car engine. We started to talk about causal things. And soon he raised a question which I'm not ready to answer but need to find some simple excuse. "Eva, why are you so against me coming to
Eva's POV I don't know, what's wrong with Janson? But the moment, I came into his view in the classroom. He looked at me with sad eyes, the eyes which I loved once but now only feel creepy to me. I don't dare to look at it even for a second because it reminded me of his untruth. I instantly ignored his eyes and followed my friends who were busy laughing and scolding each other without knowing his stares at me. "Hey Eva, we are going to a club tonight! What did you say?" Nish asked me while all the group looked at me. I know they wanted me to join them but I remember Mark's SMS and couldn't help but feel only care about it. So, without taking too much time, I apologize to them. "Sorry guys, but I have some things to do. I can't join you this time." I looked at them with a sorry eye, I know, I sound a little bitchy only thinking about myself but for now, all I want is my time to spend with Mark. Because it has a limit of time. "Hey, you got this line every time. Where are you so
Eva's POV "Janson!" "What are you doing?" "Are you turning insane?" I shouted with anger, as soon as he took me to the empty classroom forcefully, not getting anyone's sight in the corridor. "Yes! You are right, Eva! I get mad when I see you ignore me! despise me!" My face frowned to hear me. "I know, Eva! I made a big mistake, I never needed to cheat on you! But why? Why can't you give me another chance? I truly wanted us to be together again!" He blurted out with frustration and sadness which showed on his face completely. I wrapped my arms around my chest and looked at him full of bitterness at the moment. "I already told you, Janson!" "I don't want to do anything with you. Why can't you just understand this simple line? If you think doing this makes me change my mind about you? Then you are wrong. I'll never fall for you again." His brows deepened while he greeted his teeth with anger. But I don't flinch at his rage and always stare at his eyes with a determined face.
Author's POVMark drives home at a fast speed while Eva tries to talk to him many times in the car, but all he does is ignore her and her words, concentrating on his drive. Eva finally got into his angry mood and didn't speak more, she focused her eyes on the outside view. The undeniable silence between them made her little panic inside her heart. But still, she managed to look calm the whole ride and waited to go back home. To talk comfortably Mark. She doesn't understand why he is angry with her? She didn't do anything wrong here. The main culprit is Janson, Then why is he ignoring her and giving her the cold shoulder? Soon the car stopped in front of the house. Mark opens his seat belt and gets off the car without looking back at Eva, who is still inside the car.Seeing him walk away, Eva felt a little upset but she didn't let it make herself feel down. She immediately opens the seat belt and calmly gets off the car to follow Mark, who already opened the house door and now ente
Eva's POV "Damn, baby!" "You are too delicious!" Mark sucked on my nipples and asserted those words in a sexy tone. While I bit my lower lips seductively in response. He grinned at me before continuing his task. His both broad hands are massaging my full-on breast just like it's some kind of stress-relieving toy while he finally opened his hot mouth to suck on my tips from one to another and vice versa. My head tilted back to feel jolted all over my body. As my hands clench on the bedsheet tightly. Just to surpass my excitement. But feeling his hot breath on my breast. I could not help but feel aroused by his skilled tongue. The way it swirls over my buds and areola. It always gets harder and pointed to let him feed himself with my plumpy twins. This lustrous sensation almost made me lose my mind to fall In desire and let him control my body. I don't want him to stop doing this to me. Not now, not in the future. Damn, how crazy he made me think like that. And soon my hand
Mark's POV "Ride Me!" I looked at her and declared only to get her evil sly smile in return. I thought she was going to play with me but No, she just made me lie straight and sit on my belly spreading her legs on me with a proud expression. Damn, she's going to make me crazy. The way she smiled, I couldn't help but feel aroused automatically. I enjoyed her naked front view in front of me. While I licking my lips to show how tempted I'm feeling right now. She noticed my action and smirked once again before her eyes teasingly stared at me while she used one hand to touch my broad chest with her soft hand and slowly let her hand move down to my abdomen. I can see there is admiration and lust in her eyes when she's moving her fingers on my body. And this is what I liked about her. She has an innocent face but when it's time for bedtime, she's wild enough to get a man like me to go to his knees and licked that pussy admiringly. I'm looking at her slow action profoundly as I wait f