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BUSTED IS NO LONGER BUSTED!
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2024-10-29 19:42:56Hey everyone!, how are you all doing?. I want to start off by appreciating you all, I'm so grateful for the kind readers i've built here on goodnovel, grateful for all three thousand of you who decided to give this book a chance and have stuck with me since.
Since the first day this book aired on this platform, a year ago, to now, i've evolved as a writer and the course of the book has changed quite a number of times over the months.
I set out to entertain people with my writing, that has not changed, what has, however, is my style, the story telling, the story setting, the character developments and so on. I never intended for the book to be a hundred chapters long, believe me, so i realized it was dragging out, taking too long and i had to do something about it.
My point is, this book has since, underwent, and still is undergoing massive changes, restructuring and editing. Not because the way it now is wrong, but there is room for improvement. I have since attended a formal writing academy here on goodnovel and my eyes have been opened to a lot of loopholes in the book.
So, YES!, you read right, Busted is no longer Busted!.
The story line remains, with a few changes here and there, and a few supporting characters shed off, and new ones introduced. Like i said, this book is to entertain, so if anything, it is more entertaining.
And of course, yours truly received a letter of recommendation for this book to apply for an exclusive contract. So to meet criteria for this contract a lot of things are changing, but for good, i must add. The title is changing, the cover, the introduction and a little tweaks in the back stories of both female lead and male lead/love interest.
I still don't know how this is going to change the coin charges for each chapter, but this is me telling you to keep an open mind. I'm sure there shouldn't be any big changes and if there is, it'd be minimal.
This is not to scare you all, i promise, Professor Maxwell is still professor Maxwell, but rebranded with more unique characteristics, Breanna is still Breanna but with a little edge to her, more sassiness and more drama in total.
I hope y'all stick around for what's to come, i promise you will not be disappointed.
*Edited : The new first chapter is up, go check it out!.
*The book name will officially change in a few hours, brace yourselves!. The rewritten first three chapters are live, i hope you like it.
I have updated and edited till chapter six every one. SO if you're not new here, kindly go back up. Sorry for any inconvenience it might cause.
As you might have noticed, the title and book cover have changed, what are your thoughts?.
LOVE,
BEE
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