Home / Reborn / FALLEN PROMISE / Chapter 3: Eldoria Resort

Share

Chapter 3: Eldoria Resort

Author: Jessica Adams
last update Last Updated: 2024-10-29 19:42:56

Victoria and Nestor sat down for dinner, the aroma of freshly cooked dishes wafting through the air. The atmosphere was cozy, with the dim light from a nearby lamp casting a warm glow on the table.

"So, Nestor," Victoria began, sipping from her glass of water, "I heard some interesting news about the newcomers from Manila. They seem to have quite the story."

Nestor looked up from his plate, curiosity evident in his eyes. "Oh, really? What did you hear?"

"Well," Victoria started, taking a bite of her meal, "apparently, there's a family that recently moved here. A daughter returned from the United States after studying culinary arts. Quite the accomplished chef, I must say."

Nestor raised an eyebrow, intrigued. "A chef, you say? That's impressive. What's her name?"

"Carmela," Victoria replied, savoring the flavors of her dish. "Carmela, the daughter of Martin, our neighbor. She inherited her mother's beauty, they say."

Nestor nodded, his interest piqued. "And what brings her to Eldoria?"

"She and her father bought the old resort by the beach. They're planning to turn it into a business. Quite ambitious, don't you think?"

 

"That's quite the venture," Nestor remarked, cutting into his meat. "What does Martin think about it?"

Victoria chuckled. "Martin seems thrilled about the prospect. He sees it as an opportunity for growth in our quiet town. Eldoria might see some changes soon."

Nestor listened attentively as Victoria shared more details about Carmela's background and the potential impact of the new endeavor on Eldoria. The dinner conversation flowed, filled with anticipation and curiosity about the unfolding developments in their tranquil town.

As they continued their dinner, Victoria and Nestor delved deeper into the details of Carmela's return and her plans for the old resort.

Nestor, chewing thoughtfully on a forkful of food, asked, "Do you think this venture will bring significant changes to Eldoria?"

Victoria nodded, her eyes reflecting a mix of excitement and contemplation. "It's quite possible. Carmela seems determined, and Martin is genuinely enthusiastic about revitalizing that old place. Who knows, we might see new faces around here, perhaps even tourists."

Nestor smiled at the thought. "Tourists could bring more opportunities for everyone. Eldoria could become a destination, not just a quiet seaside town."

 

"Exactly," Victoria agreed. "And with Carmela's culinary expertise, the town might gain recognition for its unique flavors. I heard she's planning to showcase local ingredients and traditional recipes."

"That's wonderful," Nestor remarked. "Preserving our local culture and bringing prosperity to Eldoria—it sounds like a win-win."

Their conversation meandered through various topics, from the potential benefits of the resort's transformation to their aspirations for the future of Eldoria. The prospect of change hung in the air, and Victoria and Nestor found themselves caught in the excitement of what lay ahead.

As they shared their thoughts, a sense of unity emerged between them, a shared anticipation for the transformation that Carmela and his father Martin might bring to Eldoria. Little did they know that the currents of change had already begun, subtly weaving through the fabric of their lives.

*****

Like Carmela's intentions since yesterday, she began her leisurely stroll around the entire resort. Growing impatient, she stepped out to revisit the shoreline.

The sun had not yet climbed too high in the sky, and its gentle warmth embraced her skin. Adorned in a simple, sleeveless white dress with floral patterns, she stood watching the rhythmic dance of the waves along the shoreline.

 

Her hair, left untied, swayed freely with the breeze, kissed by the gentle caress of the wind. Unbeknownst to her, her flowing locks became a point of attraction for some onlookers, Nestor included.

******

"She's incredibly beautiful..."

Nestor whispered with admiration as he stood transfixed, watching the woman from a distance.

He knew exactly who she was—Carmela. Since last night, when he overheard her name during a conversation with Victoria, she lingered in his thoughts.

He couldn't quite understand why. In truth, he couldn't pinpoint why, after a simple and seemingly ordinary chat with Victoria, he found himself intensely curious about Carmela.

*****

IN a matter of moments, Carmela felt the seemingly paired gaze fixated on her. Shifting her focus from the vast and seemingly endless expanse of water before her, she scanned her surroundings to pinpoint the source. Her search did not go in vain.

 

Not far from where she stood, a tall, dark-skinned, undeniably handsome stranger stood. At the mere thought of him, Carmela couldn't help but feel a surge of excitement that swiftly embraced her heart with a flutter.

For a few moments, Carmela locked eyes with the stranger. Then, as if on cue, when he began to make a move, seemingly prepared to approach her, she was abruptly interrupted by the consecutive calls of her yaya, Ising.

"Hija, your father has been looking for you since a while ago. The table is set. Why did you go out alone?" Ising inquired in a tone that unmistakably revealed her concern for Carmela.

"It's remarkably tranquil here in Eldoria, Nanny Ising," she replied, seemingly absentminded, as she momentarily turned her gaze towards the spot where the man had been standing.

Whether Carmela admitted it to herself or not, she knew she felt a pang of regret when she found that he was no longer there. After that, she couldn't contain a soft sigh, as if a sigh of its own accord escaped her.

"Do you know the news, Nestor?"

Later that day, Ariel, Nestor's friend and fellow fisherman, visited him. Nestor was busy preparing the nets he would use for tomorrow's fishing expedition.

"What news?" he asked, stealing a glance at Ariel, who had just arrived and was now smilingly turning his attention to Victoria, handing her a cup of coffee.

 

"There's going to be a party at the resort, and Don Martin plans to get fish from us for the celebration!" Ariel shared enthusiastically.

"That's good news, Ariel. Where did you hear about it?" Victoria, seated on the staircase, asked. Like Nestor, she held a cup of coffee.

"From Nanny Ising herself. They say she takes care of Don Martin's child," Ariel explained further.

In the brief silence that followed, Ariel spoke again.

"If it's alright with you, Nestor, let's visit the resort now. It's guaranteed that many fishermen will flock there. It's better if we're among the first. At least that way, we're sure to have buyers for our catch," Ariel persuaded Nestor.

Nestor took a moment to contemplate Ariel's suggestion. Then he glanced at Victoria, who nodded in approval.

"When you come back, dinner will be ready," she added.

Nestor nodded and left Ariel and Victoria. As they walked away, Ariel couldn't help but comment.

"You've been together with Victoria for quite some time now, huh?"

"Five years," Nestor replied without looking at Ariel.

"Why haven't you married her yet?" Ariel asked Nestor again.

Nestor didn't respond immediately. Instead, he sighed.

 

"I still haven't saved enough. I want our wedding to be beautiful, at least a decent celebration," he explained, turning to look at Ariel.

"That's not important, Nestor. Victoria loves you very much. I'm sure she'll accept everything about you. No matter how simple it may be."

In silence, Nestor agreed with Ariel's words. Yet, in his mind, the truth lingered—though he himself didn't know the real reason why, he still hadn't proposed to Victoria.

Related chapters

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 4: PASSIONATE EVENING WITH VICTORIA

    Nestor's heart pounded loudly as he stood with Ariel outside the resort gate. He knew why he felt nervous—because of Carmela. He really didn't want to be affected by the strange feelings he had for that woman. But no matter what he did, he couldn't stop it. And he was frustrated with himself because of it.Ariel was the one who rang the doorbell. In a few moments, a uniformed maid opened the gate. She briefly left them and returned to usher them in."Wait here; Ma'am Carmela will be down shortly. I'll prepare some drinks for you," the maid said before turning away."We're so lucky. Don Martin's daughter will be joining us," Ariel expressed his delight in a hushed tone.Nestor didn't respond. During those moments, his overwhelming feelings took precedence. It intensified even more when he heard the light and approaching footsteps."Good evening," Carmela greeted them with a smile.Nestor truly stood there, momentarily transfixed and seemingly out of himself, upon seeing her.The word "

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 5: CARMELA’S FIRST KISS

    As agreed, Nestor picked her up in front of her house to accompany her in talking to other fishermen in the town of Eldoria. Initially, their plan was to bring a vehicle. But eventually, they opted to walk since their destination wasn't that far."I'd like to introduce you to my girlfriend and partner, Victoria," Nestor introduced to her the beautiful woman he called Victoria."Hello," Carmela greeted, extending her hand for a handshake, which Victoria warmly accepted.A radiant smile graced Victoria's lips, accompanied by her cordial acceptance of the handshake. "I'm pleased to meet you, Carmela. I'm also happy to have the opportunity to reopen the Eldoria Hotel, Restaurant, and Resort. It's a significant help in providing jobs for the people here aside from fishing," Victoria shared.Carmela felt the sincerity in Victoria's words and responded with a smile. "That's our plan too, Papa and I. To help the locals and provide them with job opportunities.""So, my love, I'll accompany Ms.

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 6 “PREGNANCY”

    It was a Saturday morning when Carmela was suddenly struck by relentless bouts of vomiting.“What happened to you? My God, I don’t know what to do. Your father isn’t here yet; he’s still in Manila. He won’t be back until the day after tomorrow!” This was Nanny Ising’s lengthy tirade as she assisted Carmela back to bed.She had been perfectly fine earlier in the morning. What she couldn’t understand was why, after having breakfast, she suddenly felt like her stomach had turned upside down. And it was all because of the corned beef she had for breakfast.Carmela quickly deduced the situation. She remembered the day she and Nestor went to the cottage. It had been over months. They had been successfully keeping their rendezvous secret for more than nine months now. She believed Nestor loved her dearly, even though, in reality, they were deceiving Victoria, who considered her a close friend.In her final thoughts, guilt consumed Carmela. She didn’t choose this. She never even thought about

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 7 “LUCAS”

    Those days passed quickly for Victoria. That day was special for her because it marked the anniversary of her relationship with Nestor.Just like before.Nestor left early for a fishing expedition, while Victoria immersed herself in household chores, including shopping for the special dinner she planned for later."Hey, Victoria, you look beautiful today!"As usual, Victoria quickly blushed at the compliment from her friend Sinang."Are you earlier than usual?" Dolor asked her, smiling sweetly, much like Sinang."Yeah. And also, we didn't see you here yesterday. Maybe Nestor didn't leave; that's why?" Sinang teased her, causing her face to turn even redder.Victoria shook her head in succession and hesitantly opened her mouth to answer her friends' consecutive questions."No, he left yesterday. The truth is, I didn't come here because I accompanied Carmela to their place. She wasn't feeling well," she said, her voice carrying a hint of sadness that she couldn't hide.Victoria couldn't

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 8“KIND-HEARTED VICTORIA”

    "Isn't he such a handsome baby, Nestor?" Victoria asked Nestor with excitement that night.Lucia was buried that afternoon. And as Aling Simang hoped for, Victoria took care of Lucas and willingly embraced him as her own.Truth be told, it wasn't just because Aling Simang talked to her that she decided to take the baby. As she mentioned, she wanted to give a chance for a family with Lucas and her beloved Nestor."Are you sure about what you want to happen, Victoria? Taking care of a child is a significant responsibility. Plus, we're not wealthy," Nestor remarked as he sat at the table, sipping on hot coffee.Victoria smiled as she glanced at Nestor, then gently lowered her head to smell the head of the peacefully sleeping baby in her arms."Of course. And besides, I want to experience being a mother. You know the real reason why, despite being together for so long, I haven't gotten pregnant, right?" Victoria asked."Because your witchcraft-practicing mother cursed you," Nestor sighed

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 9 “MARTIN’S WRATH”

    "Why don't I know about this, Carmela?" Martin's voice carried anger, yet it refrained from outright shouting. He caught Carmela in a compromising situation, vomiting in her bathroom, which wasn't the first time he had discovered her in such a state. Perhaps that's why he had already come to his own conclusions about her condition, even before she had a chance to reveal it to him."I-I'm sorry, Papa," she stammered, her voice teary.Carmela observed the complex emotions playing across her father's face, a tumultuous mix of concern and frustration. Even though she hadn't explicitly informed him about her pregnancy, it seemed as though he had already pieced it together. Her apology served as a form of acknowledgment, a non-verbal confirmation of the news he had likely deduced."Who is the father of this child?" Martin's question remained charged with anger.Before Carmela could respond, Nanny Ising entered her room. Worriedly, the older woman approached Carmela, who, at this moment,

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 10 “LUCAS’ CHRISTENING”

    "We're thrilled for you, Victoria. Your long-awaited dream of motherhood has finally blossomed!" Sinang's joyful proclamation elicited a radiant smile from Victoria, a testament to her deep-seated happiness. Such news wasn't a surprise to her; it had been long anticipated and fervently hoped for. Sinang and Dolor, Victoria's steadfast friends, shared in her joy, their warm camaraderie evident in the way they celebrated this significant moment.Plans for Lucas's celebration were initially straightforward in Victoria's mind—simple, yet heartfelt. However, as Carmela, Lucas's godmother, took the reins, the event took on a new level of significance and beauty. Carmela's meticulous attention to detail was evident in every aspect of the occasion, from the meticulously crafted decorations to the mouthwatering array of delicacies adorning the tables. It was a feast fit for royalty, prepared with love and care that only a friend as dear as Carmela could provide.Despite her eagerness to contri

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 11 “FORBIDDEN DESIRES

    Nestor's voice echoed with a mixture of anguish and frustration as he poured out his heart, "How can you say that, Carmela? What about me?"He sat alone in the humble hut, the silence around him punctuated only by the faint rustle of leaves outside. It had been more than a week since Carmela had departed Eldoria with Martin, leaving Nestor to grapple with his emotions and thoughts in solitude.Carmela's voice, filled with its own turmoil, responded from afar, "I'm struggling too, Nestor. But I hope you can understand the complexity of my situation and the sacrifices I've had to make for the sake of us and our child."The weight of her words hung heavily in the air, mingling with the uncertainty that clouded Nestor's mind. He couldn't help but wonder how they had reached this point, where their love seemed entangled in a web of challenges and sacrifices.Carmela's voice trembled with the weight of her struggle, her words echoing the depth of her pain. Nestor, in the solitude of th

Latest chapter

  • FALLEN PROMISE   EPILOGUE 5

    Jessa was right. Clarissa’s death had broken the curse that had been placed upon her, the curse that had prevented her from living freely, from choosing her own path. Queen Marasela had the power to undo it, to restore Clarissa’s life and give her the opportunity to live as a human, free from the shadows of her past.The Queen knew that, deep within her, she had the ability to make that happen. But a new fear gripped her heart—if she brought Clarissa back, what guarantee was there that Victoria wouldn’t kill her again?As a human, Clarissa would be even more vulnerable to Victoria’s wrath. And if Clarissa died a second time, this time as a human, Marasela would never be able to bring her back again. The thought of losing Clarissa permanently was something she could not bear.“I will bring her back,” Queen Marasela said at last, her voice firm and steady, as she wiped away the last traces of her tears.Her gaze never wavered as she met Jessa’s eyes, and in that moment, it felt as if the

  • FALLEN PROMISE   EPILOGUE 4

    "SON?" Victoria's voice trembled with both relief and fear as she gently grasped her son's hand.Lucas had been in a coma for three long days, and the anxiety that had consumed her during that time was almost unbearable. She had stayed by his side, watching him, praying for his recovery, but the uncertainty had gnawed at her. Now, seeing him slowly open his eyes and blink at the harsh hospital lights, it felt like a weight had been lifted from her chest. She had feared losing him, but here he was, awake and breathing, a sign that perhaps the worst was over.Lucas’s voice was weak, barely a whisper, but the concern in his eyes was evident as he tried to focus on her. "M-Mama, how’s Clarissa? Is she okay?"His question struck her like a blow, and her heart faltered. Clarissa. The name hung in the air, filling the space between them with an unbearable silence. Victoria felt her throat tighten, her eyes welling up as she fought to control the flood of emotions threatening to overwhelm her

  • FALLEN PROMISE   EPILOGUE 3

    “MY SON must not see that mermaid again. I want you to kill her, Marlon!” Victoria's voice cut through the air with chilling command, her face contorted with fury.The words tumbled from her lips, each one a venomous strike aimed at the very heart of what she could not control. Her eyes, typically calm and calculating, were now wide with rage, the fire of her anger burning through her every word. This was no longer a mere request—it was an ultimatum.Her hands clenched around the steering wheel, knuckles pale from the force, as she glared at the man beside her. Every fiber of her being trembled with the thought of her son, the light of her life, being tainted by the mermaid, Clarissa. She would not—could not—allow such a thing to happen. The idea of losing her son to someone so foreign, so incomprehensible, drove her into a frenzy. No, this mermaid was an obstacle she was determined to eliminate.Victoria’s heart pounded in her chest, her mind a whirlwind of thoughts, but at its core

  • FALLEN PROMISE   EPILOGUE 2

    She had always longed for a connection with him, something pure and filled with love. But instead, all she had now were painful, fragmented memories of a man who had been driven by revenge rather than affection. The sobs wracked her body as the emotional turmoil threatened to swallow her whole.She felt as if everything she had known about her life had been a lie, and her father's absence in her world now felt like a deep, unhealable wound. The grief mixed with fury, and the sobs came harder, each one more desperate than the last.“That’s how cruel humans are, Clarissa,” Queen Marasela said softly, her voice filled with both sorrow and understanding. She gently took Clarissa’s trembling hand in her own, offering what little comfort she could in this moment of raw emotional turmoil. As the queen held her hand, there was a quiet strength in her touch, a silent reminder that even in the most heartbreaking moments, Clarissa was not entirely alone. Marasela's eyes glistened with compassio

  • FALLEN PROMISE   EPILOGUE 1

    “What is your relationship with that man from the human world, Clarissa?” Queen Marasela asked, her voice firm and tinged with a seriousness that demanded an honest answer. The weight of the queen’s question struck Clarissa like a tidal wave, leaving her breathless. Her heart pounded relentlessly, as if trying to escape the mounting tension in the room.But it wasn’t just the question itself that had her in turmoil. The piercing tone of authority in Queen Marasela’s voice and the unwavering intensity in her eyes as she locked gazes with Clarissa made it impossible for her to hide the truth any longer. For a moment, the room felt stiflingly silent, save for the sound of Clarissa’s quickened breaths. She could sense the weight of the queen’s expectations pressing down on her shoulders. Still, she hesitated, her lips parting as though to speak, only for her courage to falter. “I thought we had already reached an understanding long ago,” Queen Marasela continued, her words heavy with a

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 46: FIRST KISS 4

    The sound of Clarissa’s voice was like a jolt to Lucas’s system. It made his heart leap in his chest, and for a moment, he was frozen. He had spent so many sleepless nights thinking about her, wondering if they would ever cross paths again. And now, here she was, walking toward him with a warm, familiar smile that seemed to light up everything around her. He felt a mix of relief and joy flood his chest as his eyes locked onto her form, drawing closer with every step.Without thinking, Lucas stood up from the large rock he had been sitting on, as if his body was reacting to the instinctive pull of her presence. His fingers subconsciously reached into his pocket, a nervous habit he hadn’t realized he’d picked up over the years, but he didn’t mind. His heart was pounding in his ears as he watched Clarissa move toward him, her graceful steps carrying her closer. He couldn’t tear his eyes away from her, unable to stop smiling as he took in the sight of her. She had changed, grown even mor

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 45: FIRST KISS 3

    “NEXT WEEK, will you come back? Your grandfather will be arriving with Nanny Norma. I’ll be heading back to the mansion, and your daddy has to go to the clinic,” Carmela informed Clarissa later that same day, after breakfast had passed. The light from the late afternoon sun filtered in through the windows, casting a warm glow across the room. There was a calmness in the air, but Carmela’s words brought with them a ripple of change, signaling another shift in their already complicated lives.“Daddy is going to Manila?” Clarissa asked, her voice tinged with curiosity and a touch of sadness. The thought of her father being away, even for a short time, felt like another piece of her already fragmented world slipping out of reach. The house in Eldoria, while full of love and comfort, never quite felt the same without him close by.Carmela nodded, understanding the weight of her daughter’s unspoken emotions. “Don’t worry. It won’t be long before he moves here to Eldoria. We’re selling

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 44: FIRST KISS 2

    "IT'S GOOD you thought of visiting us, dear," Carmela said, her voice warm and gentle as she carefully combed her hair, the soft brush strokes providing a rhythmic comfort. Her words held the familiarity of a mother’s love, and though she was busy with her task, her gaze never strayed too far from Clarissa, the quiet concern in her eyes evident. She had always been attentive to the smallest changes in her daughter’s demeanor, and it wasn’t lost on her that something seemed different today. But she didn’t press; for now, she allowed Clarissa the space she needed.Clarissa smiled at her mother, her lips curving upward in a way that felt more automatic than genuine. She felt a deep warmth in her chest at Carmela’s words, but her thoughts were scattered, tangled in the emotions she had tried to suppress. As her mother’s gaze moved toward the mirror, Clarissa’s attention drifted to the vastness of the sea outside the window, its endless stretch of blue almost beckoning to her. She sta

  • FALLEN PROMISE   CHAPTER 43: FIRST KISS 1

    PRESENT DAY A sweet smile spread across Jessa’s lips as she glanced at Clarissa. Her eyes sparkled with the hint of mischief, the kind that only someone as close as Jessa could manage. “Come on, Queen Marasela is looking for you,” she said, her voice light and teasing. Reaching out with a gentle but insistent hand, she tried to pull Clarissa along, guiding her through the cool, shimmering waters that lapped at the edges of the rocky shore. The water sparkled beneath the sun, and the air was thick with the sounds of the waves crashing gently against the rocks. It was the perfect moment for a peaceful stroll, yet Jessa’s impatience was palpable. But to Jessa’s surprise, Clarissa didn’t move. She remained seated on the large, smooth rock that jutted out from the water, her gaze fixed on the horizon. Her posture was still, as if she was lost in thought, caught in the depths of her own world. Her fingers lightly gripped the rock beside her, her knuckles white as she seemed to an

DMCA.com Protection Status