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2024-10-29 19:42:56After 16 years:
Maggie point of view:
I was so into Marias' story that my spirit almost left my body when an old lady about 60 years old, knocked on the window. I jumped from surprise but she just ignored me and stepped away in waiting for us to come out. Maria immediately opened the door of the car and get out.
-"What did you do?" the old lady shouted angrily to Maria in doesn't pay attention that we are together with her. YoYo and I slowly stepped from a car too in closing doors behind. We looked at each other with raised eyebrows because of surprise of her grandmother's behaverior.Not hi, nice to meet you or who are your friend? Well YoYo knew Maria long time before I showed up.
But now I know from where that strong and difficult attitude of Maria appeared. They were very familiar. Almost on her all fingers were huge rings of different shapes and symbols, on her head was a dark purple headwrap with a plait from the same material on up, she ha
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