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DEOS II

Author: ILION
last update Last Updated: 2021-08-26 16:18:24

fourth page- Lux fierre Critsia (Title of the page/chapter)

The Creator once had a dream, a portrait of a being in a polychromatic landscape living in joyous. After that image, the very first man was modelled, out of white strings, tying itself together as the all-powerful commands it.

 It was so great, it didn’t lack beauty, so the Master of life breath into it, and it started to show signs of life.  

He was named Lux Fierre Crit-sia;  the ‘’light of the civilization’’.

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Mountains crumbled in many quantities, earth shook down grounds, it was not beautiful, it was unearthly. It looked like the end-of-the-world scenario to Niru.

Inappropriacy appeared after another, unrealistic and terrible-The distortion.

As lux manipulates the bizarre occurrence, he levitates in air, debris follows every movement of his arm in flowing stream; like a liege lord, he stands in high power- Niru yield to his favor because of what he has seen- To be his child.

‘’This strange phenomenon is called the distortion.’’

‘’I believe you’ve already seen it before…. Before you warped back in time.’’

‘’Warped… back in… time??, right… I’ve seen something like this… when I jumped off the cliff…’’

‘’Yes.’’

‘’You can go back in time. You have the power to control it as you like, a power any one of our likelihood would desire...’’

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‘’like me…’’ (in weak voice)

‘’But… I don’t even know what time really is… I’ve only heard it twice, first was when my father mentioned it, second is now… And why me…why do I have such ability, is this the Creator’s will?’’

‘’Don’t worry, don’t question yourself. I will guide and nurture you to unlock your ability’s full potential.’’

‘’Time will eventually fill your questions with answers, do not be anxious.

‘’You are the rightful owner of that power...’’

‘’And please call me father from now on.’’

Lux accepted Niru as his own and taught him of words that isn’t written in DEOS; words like, year, months, day, hour and many more of words that would help him in understanding the world on a deeper depth- Although Niru stayed vigilant, that this man might be corrupting his mind, he can see a portion of his soul in eye, that he sincere in teaching him.

Not much of a time later, something happened…

Niru’s curse may have already ended, but it didn’t make him intolerant to the feeling of starvation, he started to feel the growl of his stomach again, holding it tight, like he is going to spend another of years enduring a seemingly endless pain, putting himself into tears- even if it isn’t actually that painful.

‘’hungry?’’

Lux noticed that Niru is having a distress so he quickly reached for him to help.

‘’Hungry? What is a hungry?’’

‘’Here, pick up some fruit.’’

An object grew out of nowhere, appears like unanimated but the inside of it is life … and in it, small, thin and soft things in strange color grows in size and number. Not fewer than a minute, the entire thing became tall and thick, colorful and lively- as lots of objects in odd shapes called ‘’fruit’’ gives it vibrance.

‘’This is a fruit bearing tree, with this you can ease your growling stomach.’’

‘’WHAT?’’

‘’Let me pick one for you, that one is good, eat that.’’

Without a moment of dither, Niru gnawed on the fruit that lux picked for him and made loud crunches- and he quickly noticed that the discomfort of his stomach has stopped.

‘’This is great! Can I have all of this?’’

‘’Yes, help yourself.’’

Niru stuffed himself until he can’t anymore. But Lux fierre, the one who handed all the tasteful fruit for Niru didn’t eat at all, and he is there being anxious by the side, distressed.

‘’Father?’’

Niru, called lux his father for the first time, thinking that it would lift up his mood.

‘’There is something that troubles my mind… the very reason why I wanted to guide you to your great potential.’’

‘’Please tell me father, I shall do my all to assist you with everything that bothers you.’’

Within that time, Niru finally opens himself to lux, learned of so many things, his knowledge about their world is further developed and leveraged for a goal; that is to make knowledge be available to everyone and recreate a better place. The both of them reflected unto a mutual contemplation- That something in their world is wrong and must be fixed- similar but at least for some part.

Many questions have finally come to its solution.

Even so…

Many are still to be answered in the following time.

Someone gathered a group of people to check the sacred cliff of Atla, in response to a report that some man has set foot in the forbidden place, bringing rocks as they march toward the cliff, if the reports were true, whoever that man who have entered the restricted place will be stoned.

Seeing Niru near the tree- which appears strange to them, they thought that he is doing some kind of black arts to ruin the divinity of the place- It also appears that they cannot see lux.

In great force, they throw rocks at him as they shout in disparaging language. For some reason, everything they throw all missed. It seemed to them that an invisible force is redirecting the rocks away from Niru, and that Niru is using an art that is against to the law of DEOS- But It was Lux who deflected all of it.

Only the both of them who are aware of the distortion can see what really happened, that Niru is protected by distorting reality, creating a barrier that can divert or warp anything it touches- or simply bend reality.

Niru saw what lux did and have discovered something from it, the idea behind power, distortion denies reality and produces abnormal occurrences, people with the ability to see through the reality (distortion) can use this for many things, and a lot more things if you are creative enough to utilize its full capabilities. Opening up a possibility of a better future. But it makes him feel bad that no other than lux can see how its power can deliver a life at great ease to the people and fix everything that doesn’t make a perfect logic. With the new discoveries and knowledge that he had accumulated, he tried to summon the distortion.

Lux were astounded, that Niru actually managed to summon distortion all by himself.

It lasted for some seconds. He is not able to do a thing for such short period of time but it made a simple yet ample result.

The people who are trying to harm Niru left him in peace. it appears that they forgot what they were doing there, and since they left, it also appears that Niru disappeared in their sight- He became invisible to them but only because the distortion surrounded him. After that, he lost his consciousness, his body fell on the ground.

‘’I’ll let you rest for now, you impressed me, you’ve learned so much by just a day.’’

  ‘’wait… what is that.’’

A glowing orb in a color similar to the head of trees is there left by someone from the people who came by. Lux stretched his arm and the orb flew right to him.

‘’What is thi..’’

Lux suddenly fell on his feet and became unconscious too.

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‘’What? ‘The first’ sure know how to write bad scripts…’’

-----END of chapter 2----

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