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"what if our Cinderella character ends up as Cinderona with no glass slippers and no prince from any castle but instead with a stepmother and a sisters who can do anything to ruin her?"

"Or what if the man who's not a prince doesn't like what the future has installed for him? A dark skinned CinderOna instead of a Meek skinned Cinderella?"

S u m m a r y

The first time Ona Balboa met Donnie Dellucci, a wealthy and mysterious handsome young Italian man, her only wish is to lay once on his bed.

But when Adonis (Donnie) Dellucci, first lay eyes on Caitrona Balboa the rural dark skinned lady with the crazy and special ingredients, aloof and cool as him, he couldn't help it but let her be...

This is a CinderOna's story, not a Cinderella's with a prince in a castle.

A u t h o r s n o t e

Not to be too alarmed but I would like to inform you all that this book might suck, it's a little bit of an Italian English book. I'll be translating every Italian used word after the end of each chapter. The grammar might be bad, the plot is hmm, as I want them to be, you know this book could be better with your help.

I will be editing this out and might even publish an unedited drafted version but if y' all like clingy female characters and plot war, well then you'll have a lot of fun. Don't say I didn't warn you. Enjoy!

A D O N I S - D E L L U C C I

Age ✓ 31 years old

Nationality✓ Italian

Nickname✓ Donnie- DD

Tag✓ Heir to the Dellucci empire

Position✓ First grandson

Parent✓ grandparents and Father

Siblings✓ Ronnie Dellucci (25yrs)

Behaviour✓ cold, aloof, Pokerface

Relationship✓ once engaged

Education ✓ All degrees cleared

C A I T R O N A   B A L B O A 

Age ✓ 23

Nationality ✓ Italian&Nigerian

Nickname ✓ Ona- Rona- CAI

Tag ✓ Cast out daughter of riches

Position ✓ first daughter to the first wife

Parents ✓ father, grandmother

Siblings ✓ stepsister

Behaviour ✓ Rural, clingy, fighter,caring

Relationship ✓ None

Education ✓ College student

Please and please, don't steal my work, we all have ideas of our own, I'm using mine so please use yours. Thanks for reading this part of this book.

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Skylyn Gordon
Love this! ...
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J. Renee' King or Renee' King
Children, a partner, or school, so keep writing and updating them by telling them you’re giving them your best and don’t sweat the rest. I will be a GOODNOVEL author soon so I’ve learned from reading other peoples comments not to do just that!
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J. Renee' King or Renee' King
Listen lady you are first and foremost an author. So with that being said, write your truth and if you get criticized then take it as a learning lesson and not a reason to take offense. On these sites everyone reading these stories wants them updated yesterday and they don’t care if you have a job,
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