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16. Vengeful Spirit: Spirit, spirit of the coin. Please come out and play with us (Final)
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2021-10-28 18:03:18The news about the girls' disappearance is spreading like wildfire throughout the college. The discussion about them is so heated with so much overboard speculation being thrown around and making the internet lagging, affecting the efficiency of the connection.
An anonymous user even dropped a bomb, that their disappearance is closely related to the school's dark secret, and this incident is not the first one that ever happened. Those participants curiously inquired, asking whether what he said was true or false. And the anonymous user answered with one revelation that shocked everyone to the bone.
-Anonymous user: This had happened before. Last year, thirteen students from the first year were found missing from their camping site on the college ground. I am sorry. I cannot tell you where, but they indeed vanished from the college's compound. Until today, their whereabouts were untraceable. And, there are no clues found from the camping site. Those students simply va
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