Hunter checked his time.
11:24.
His flight was at 14:00 hours. He had prepared everything and had packed all his gear. Leaving the country was not on his wishlist but there was nothing he could have done, that was his only way to stay alive. He didn’t expect Hilary to betray him like that. Trust, for him, was a big word but he relied on her. He knew she could deliver but along the way, love happened to her. It was the same love that got her killed. Hunter didn’t have any regrets on Hilary’s murder. Killing had become a hobby for him.
His phone rang.
He looked at it feeling his heart pound. He answered and remained quiet.
“Hunter!” A man’s voice answered on the other end of the line.
Hunter didn’t say anything.
“I can feel you breathing and from the looks for it, you are scared Hunter,” the man said.
Hunter restrained himself not to say anything.
“Well, let me get to the point,” the man paused and coughed. “I know you have Hilary but guess what, you can do anything you want with her, I’m done with her. I got all the information I wanted from her,” the man laughed.
Hunter thought about Hilary’s last scream.
“A man like you should never trust a woman. Women betray in a blink of an eye. You should know better.”
He clenched his fists.
“I would like us to meet one of these days and talk,” the man added. “That is if you will still be alive.”
He felt a surge of fury.
“I told them to take you out without much difficult and struggle so that you would be spared of the pain.”
He heard sounds from the outside. He walked to his window and moved the curtains slightly. He saw two men climbing his fence.
“I’m certain you are now aware,” the voice on the phone said. “Anyway goodbye Mr Hunter.”
Hunter quickly went to his gear bag and opened it. He reached for the gun and then thought to himself that it was daylight. He couldn’t use a gun. While debating on what weapon to use, his front door clicked. He knew they had entered. He got his knife and hid behind the door. He stood still behind the door hearing the footsteps which were slowly approaching his bedroom door. From the footsteps, he could discern that it was only one person coming at him.
The door opened. Hunter saw a gun first which the man was holding. Before he could even see his face, Hunter grabbed the gun and hit the man twice with his right elbow on the face. He threw the gun below his bed and whilst the man was still touching his face, Hunter jumped on him and they both landed on the floor. He clenched his fist so hard and hit the man on the face directly deeming him unconscious.
He heard footsteps running towards where he was. He slowly went back inside the bedroom and locked it. He zipped his gear bag and carried it. He went to his window, opened it and got out from it. He ran to the front door and locked it from the outside. He went behind the house and got his car and drove it out of his compound seeing the other man looking at him from the window banging it. He knew he would never shoot because it was daylight and that would have attracted unnecessary attention. Hunter didn’t want to kill those two. His intentions were to send a message to the man on the phone. He drove to the airport. Upon arrival, he knew it would take a miracle to bring him back to Zambia. He was going to his usual hideout in Madagascar.
Mrs. Visashi sat across her husband, Mr. Visashi, on a table in his office. They were both quiet avoiding each others eyes. Mr. Visashi tried to make himself busy because he was feeling her thoughts, and from time to time, saw her evil stare.
“You heard me Kent!” She broke the silence.
“I did,” Kent sighed.
“So what are you going to do about it?” She asked him.
Kent sighed, “my hands are tied. I have so many upcoming and published writers on my back. I cannot squeeze in her work. She’s not even done with her novel.”
“I read a part of it, trust me, its good. I know good when I see good,” Kate said confidently.
“There is a process we follow, Kate,” Kent paused and looked at her. “Just because you like her doesn’t mean she’s all that good.”
“What are you saying Kent?” Kate raised her eyebrows.
Kent shifted uneasily.
“I’m saying let us give her time. She’s still young. Let her perfect her craft and we can talk about her work in two or three years.”
“Impossible!” Kate raised her voice. “If you only saw what I saw, you wouldn’t be saying all this. I thought your work was to assist people like Ludo to fulfill their dreams.”
“It is.”
“But why can’t you?”
“I’m tied Kate.”
“Whatever!” She stood up and headed for the door.
Kent knew better not to let her go out of his sight angry. He stood up and before she could reach the door, he stopped her by holding her hand and closed the door.
“What?” She asked him.
“Sit down.”
She rolled her eyes as she grabbed the chair.
Kent took a deep breathe while tucking his shirt properly and sat down.
“What you’re asking of me is too big Kate,” he said after much thought.
“I couldn’t be asking you for something you cannot manage to do Kent.”
“I know.”
“But?”
“Nothing,” he gulped. “You will have to tell her to bring her work here so that I can take a look at it.”
“Really?”
“Yes.”
“Awwwn my Kent, you’re such a darling.”
“I’m not promising anything though.”
“Fair enough,” Kate got up and went to her husband and kissed him goodbye.
She got outside Bookworld publishing company, beaming with happiness. She got her phone and dialed Ludo’s number.
“Hello Mrs. Visashi,” Ludo answered.
“Hi dear how are you?”
“I’m fine. Sorry about what happened four days ago,” Ludo laughed.
Kate laughed too.
“Its fine my dear. Have you started working on the final chapter of your book?”
“Yes i have.”
“That’s good. Well, I have good news.”
“What is it, Mrs. Visashi?”
“My husband is an editor for Bookworld Publishers and I talked to him about your Novel and he said he would be more than glad to check it out.”
“You’re kidding!” Ludo exclaimed excitedly
“No I’m not dear.”
Ludo screamed joyfully.
“Sorry about that,” she giggled.
“I will text you the address and his number. You should go there and pitch him your work. Is that okay?”
“Yes it is,” Ludo said sadly.
Kate recognised the sadness in Ludo’s voice.
“What is it?”
“What if he doesn’t like it?”
“He will, trust me. I didn’t even tell him about the genre because I want it to be a surprise to him.”
“I will go there. I have to talk to mom first.”
“Okay dear take care now!”
Ludo hung up her cellphone and sighed.
“Talk to me about what?” Her mother entered the bedroom.
“You were eavesdropping mom?” Ludo asked surprised.
“No I was coming to call you for lunch and heard that you will have to talk to me first. What is it? Who were you talking to?”
“It was Mrs. Visashi, mom.”
“Ohhh. How is she?”
“Good.”
“What were two talking about?”
“Apparently, she thinks my novel is worth publishing.”
“You showed her?” Ludo’s mother asked surprised.
“Yes mom. She was interested in it.”
“I thought we agreed we would self publish it.”
“Yes I know but wouldn’t self publishing be expensive mother?”
Ludo’s mother nodded.
“You see? Let us try out Mrs. Visashi’s husband.”
“Its her husband?”
“Yes. He is the editor at Bookworld publishing company.”
“That’s huge.”
“I know, right?”
“But you are yet to finish the last chapter.”
“Its just the last chapter, we have to finish it tonight mom.”
“Tonight?”
“Yes. You have plans?”
“Not really but I thought tonight was movie night.”
“We can postpone mom.”
“Ok sweetie.”
Ludo and her mother worked on the novel the whole night. By the time it was 3am, they were convinced it was done.
“Are you really sure this is the ending you wanted?” Ludo’s mother asked her.
“I’m sure yeah,” Ludo answered with a smile.
“Ok take it tomorrow.”
“Have you drafted the synopsis?”
“Yes I have.”
“Good. Have some rest, you have a big day tomorrow.”
“Goodnight mom.”
“Goodnight sweetie.”
“Wait mom. Dad?”
“He called me saying he traveled.”
“He didn’t tell me.”
“I’m sure he will call you this morning.”
“Ok mom.”
As Ludo walked to the gate of BookWorld publishers, she felt her heart racing. She started doubting herself if what she had written was good enough. She wanted to go back but comforted herself that it was going to be fine. She reached Mr. Visashi’s office and found a secretary.
“How can I help you young lady?” The secretary asked with a smile.
“I’m here to see Mr. Visashi,” Ludo answered.
“You have an appointment with him?”
“Yes.”
The secretary got her receiver and dialed. Ludo watched her talk while she admired the office.
“You can go in dear.”
Ludo went in and found Mr. Visashi sitted comfortably on his chair. He pointed her to a chair.
“You must be Ludo?” He stared at her.
Ludo couldn’t feel her legs as she sat down. She was nervous.
“Yes sir.”
“Ok I’m going to give you one chance to lure me into the world you have created. My wife talked highly of it.”
“What do you mean 'lure you' sir?”
“You have the synopsis?”
“Yes sir,” Ludo opened her laptop bag and got a piece of paper and wanted to hand it to Mr. Visashi.
“No. Keep it for now.”
Ludo was surprised.
“Where is the manuscript?”
“Its in the bag sir.”
“Ok, tell me about your story. What genre is it?”
“Crime fiction.”
Mr. Visashi’s face brightened. It had been a while ever since a writer had come who was in the genre of crime fiction.
“What is it about?”
“Its about a family who are involved in every sort of crime imaginable. Their crime activities are run by their mother.”
Mr. Visashi’s curiousity grew even more.
“I have given names to my main characters. For example, the mom is referred as a Lioness. The first born is Brawler and his brother is Brains while the last born is Jezebel,” Ludo smiled.
“I see.”
“And their father is wheelchair ridden. He is the Wounded Lion. He has stroke.”
Mr. Visashi smiled and said, “I hope the work is as good as what you have told me.”
“It is sir,” she smiled.
“Ok hand it to me. I will get back to you. Let me have my people look at it. Don’t worry I will give you an honest opinion of your work.”
“Thank you,” Ludo left.
Later that evening, Mr. Visashi was having a drink with one of his friends and mostly they would talk about work and other things. He got interested with Ludo’s work but was only worried if she was ready enough to get published. His wife told him about her condition and got really concerned.
“What is bothering you my friend?” Obrien asked Kent.
“A girl brought a manuscript today and I think she’s destined for greatness. I’m just worried about her condition,” Kent answered.
“If she’s good don’t worry about her condition. How good is her work?”
“Very good. My people said they are enjoying it.”
“Really?”
“Yes man,” Kent sipped on his pint.
“What is it about?”
Kent told Obrien about Ludo’s storyline. He told him everything she had told him amd he was equally astonished.
“It’s good i tell you. My wife has an eye for good things,” Kent smiled.
“Unfortunately not when it came to you,” Obriene laughed.
“You fool.”
“Let me grab some more beers,” Obriene stood up.
Kent remained and texted his wife that he was going to come a little bit late than usual.
“Excuse me,” a man touched Kent’s shoulder.
Kent turned around and didn’t seem to know the man.
“How can i help you?”
“I couldn’t help it but heard you talking about a story.”
“Ohh yea. A girl brought in a story that we are currently working on.”
“Did you mention something like Brawler, Brains and Jezebel?”
“Yes, you are a great listener,” Kent was surprised.
“Those names you mentioned exist,” the man looked around as if scared.
“Yes they exist in Ludo’s story.”
“No! Not in the story.”
Kent looked at the man.
“Those are real people.”
“Are you drunk?”
“I’m having orange juice,” the man showed Kent his glass. “The names you mentioned are nick names of the infamous crime lords of our City. Brawler and Brains are twins.”
“You are kidding right?”
“How i wish i was, man. Your girl, Ludo, is getting herself into some serious trouble,” the man said assured. “Did they do something to her?”
Kent’s heartbeat raced. He remembered she told him it’s crime Fiction.
“If i were you. I would stop talking about those names because people who do don’t live to tell the tale. Look at those guys over there,” the man pointed at a group of guys sitted looking at them.
Kent tilted his neck.
“They also heard you talk about the trio.”
“It’s a story,” Kent said shaking.
“Don’t tell me i didn’t warn you,” The man stood up and left the club.
Kent was panting heavily. Obriene came back and asked what was wrong with him. Kent looked around the club and felt that all eyes were on him.
“I have to go,” he got up and ran to his car.
Ludo couldn’t stop smiling about the progress she was making. She felt at peace knowing that she was trying something different. At least she would prove to her father that all the time she spent writing was not a waste. She looked at the photo of her parents on her table and smiled. She touched it and said, “Goodnight my people, i hope you work things out.” She closed her eyes and drifted to sleep.
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“You must be joking,” Kate looked at Kent and bursted into laughter. “I’m serious Kate. The man was serious,” Kent said seriously. “That’s just bullshit! He was just trying to scare you!” She objected him. “Where could Ludo have gotten all the information from to write a story about the most notorious crime lords of our country?” “You have to ask her,” Kent shrugged. “He was just scaring you.”She repeated. “I could feel it in my heart that he wasn’t.” “How come I haven’t heard about these people?” “You are not in their circles that’s why.” “Are you?” Kent nodded. “If they are that notorious, we could have read about them somewhere,” Kate concluded the discussion. Kent didn’t say anything but looked at his wife. “Finish up your breakfast; you have to go to work,” She told him while she washed the plates. Kent had not slept much after the talk he had with the stranger in the club. H
Zamiwe walked into the living room throwing her hand bag on the floor and herself on the couch. She put her legs on the table as she exhaled heavily.“What a day!” She sighed. “Ludo!” She called.She was very tired that she dosed off within minutes of sitting down.“Anybody home?” Joe asked as he entered the living room.He was equally tired from his trip. He saw Zamiwe sleeping on the couch and memories flashed back. He remembered how good they were together before Ludo’s sickness kicked in. They were a small happy family. He walked to her and sat beside her. He looked at her and smiled. Her face was covered with her hair. He moved the hair to the side. He was looking at her face clearly now. She was still as beautiful as ever. If only she could have been this beautiful even when she was awake, perhaps they could have been happy but behind this sleepy innocent face was a nagger.She felt him
Erica sat in her range rover waiting for her fiancé, Jean. She saw him coming from a distance with a woman talking and laughing. She grabbed her cigarette. She looked for a lighter but couldn’t find one in the car. Jean and the woman separated and Jean went to Erica’s car. As soon as he got into the car, she started shouting at him. Jean was used to Erica’s tantrums that he would just watch her blubber till she got tired. “Are you done Erica?” Jean asked her. “Who is that whore?” She eyed him. “A workmate,” he responded looking away. “Hhhhmmm. You also said the same about the last one till I found out you were shagging her,” she said. “How many people do you whore around with in the name of family business?” “You wouldn’t be here if I wasn’t doing that. Don’t you ever dare question what i do. I hope you are saying the truth because you know what happens to your whores,” Erica said. Ignoring her, he asked, “What was the urgent c
Ludo entered a room. From a distance, she saw a round table. A voice called her to sit. She hesitated but another angry voice ordered her to sit down. As she walked to the table, she saw four people seated but couldn’t see their faces. She felt sweat on her forehead but couldn’t wipe it, her hands were suddenly tied. She looked at the figures in front of her but the moment she sat down, she stopped hearing their voices but could only see their heads move. There was a blood stained knife on the table. She felt something move behind her. She wanted to shout but couldn’t. One of the figures in front of her stood up and started walking to her. She felt something hairy on her shoulder. Her body was filled with goosebumps. She slowly moved her head to check it out and it was a tail. The figure coming towards her and picked the knife from the table. She heard a silent roar and knew there was an animal behind her; not just any animal but a vicious one. The animal lurked behind her. Using he
Elise couldn’t put the manuscript down. With each page she flipped, she wanted to flip more. The amount of information and deep secrets she had read in just the two chapters she read were overwhelming. It went as wide as uncovering what they did as well as some important deals their company- EEE group of companies did. She closed and looked at the manuscript and thought about Ludo. Where did she get all the information? she asked herself.“Mom!” Erica called out to her“What is it,erica? I'm busy,” Elise answered“I have brought Mr. Jackson,” Erica said“The accountant who ran away?” Elise asked curiously“yes mom.Elise quickly stood up and went to her daughter. she looked at her and smiled“You are just like me; you know that?” she asked her&ld
“So how was work mom?” Ludo asked Zamiwe. “Great my daughter,” Zamiwe smiled as she passed Joe a plate of veggies. “How about you dad? Business?” “So far, it's doing well,” Joe answered. “How was your day?” “It was fine. Boring for the most parts,” Ludo chuckled. “What did you do?” Zamiwe asked. “Nothing as usual. I just watched TV,” Ludo sighed. “I wanted to apologize for the way I talked to you two the other day.” “It’s okay sweetie, you apologized already. We saw the texts,” Zamiwe looked at Joe, smiling. “Yes baby, we saw them. And we are glad you felt bad about it. We weren’t upset with you; we were just worried,” Joe added. “I know. I’m sorry; it will never happen again.” Ludo and her parents were having an early supper. Zamiwe and Joe had discussed that they should be spending more time with their daughter. They were willing to put their differences aside for Ludo. They wanted to be
Jean admired Erica as she walked to him. As usual, she didn’t disappoint. She looked as beautiful as a rose. He was glad she was his, despite knowing what her family subjected her to. Jean kept telling himself that everything she did, she did for the good of all. He avoided dwelling too much on what she did because the last time he did, he cheated on her and was on the verge of leaving her.“Hey handsome,” Erica pecked him.“You look stunningly awesome,” Jean said holding her hand walking into Dil Restaurant.They were led to a table Jean reserved for their dinner.“Why this place?” Erica asked.“They offer the best Asian and Indian food,” Jean answered, assured of himself. “And you know I’m a sucker for Asian food.”“Yeah i know,” Erica said looking around.“Do you know anyone here?” Jean asked.“Not really.&rdqu
Ludo’s phone rang.She looked at it and looked at Hunter.“Cut the call!” He ordered her.“It’s my mother!” Ludo yelled.Hunter’s forehead formed furrows.“What do you want with me?” Ludo reached for the door handle.“Just sit. Will you?”Ludo stopped fidgeting and sunk in the seat.“How do you know the Hamuumbus?”“Are you the eldest son?” Ludo asked.“Don’t ask me questions, answer me.”“I don’t really know them I just met them a few days ago. Did they send you? Tell Elise that I’m taking the soft copy.”Hunter looked at Ludo irritated.“Wait…. You just killed Mr. Jabulani. That means she didn’t send you.“At least you can think,” Hunter said.Who are you? What do you want with me?” Ludo inquired.Hunter
****ONE MONTH LATER***** Ludo, Lance, Kate and Walutanga came out of the Magistrate court excited. They had managed to put the criminals behind bars. Naveen was sentenced to forty years imprisonment. Ben cooperated by being an informant and his sentence was reduced to 10 years. Grace was put in a mental hospital. After Mapulanga died, she somehow went crazy. “Ludo!” Melanie shouted at Ludo. Ludo went over to where Melanie was. She was with her husband and son. “Hey beautiful family,” said Ludo. “Congratulations to you Ludo” Melanie’s husband said. “Thanks Norton and thank you Melanie,” she hugged her. “You really helped us clear Hunter's name.” “No problem dear. Where is he by the way?” Melanie asked. “He never came to trial. Not even a single day. The moment he was released after that arrest, he went AWOL.” she said. “That’s Hunter for you,” Ludo replied with a smirk. “Anyways, We are going now.” Melanie
Driving a Land Rover Discovery at the speed of light, Naveen kept his eyes on the road while engaging Hunter. He wanted to know more but Hunter couldn’t tell him things he also wasn’t sure about.Immediately after putting a bullet into Devi’s neck, Naveen had pressured Hunter. “Who assassinated my old man?”Confused, looking at Devi’s lifeless body, Hunter had answered, “I told you before, it’s just a speculation.”“Tell me about it!” Naveen had yelled.“Come on man. It’s just a speculation. I know the man who pulled the trigger but the mastermind behind it is the one i am not sure of.”“Who pulled the trigger?”“Some guy named Stone.”“I don’t know anyone by that name. Why would he want my dad dead?”Hunter had gone quiet.“Hunter I am talking to you!” Naveen had pointed the gun at Hu
Unshaken, Hunter stepped towards Naveen and stood face to face with him. “I know you can kill me right here right now but i don’t have any beef with you Naveen. I have no problem with you or your family. I came here for Devi.“This is my house!” Naveen pushed him back.“And it so happened Devi is here. He almost killed an entire family in Chisoti village to get you that land. He didn’t succeed because of me.”This was news to Naveen, completely different from what he was told. “I don’t care what you tell me, you killed my father Hunter.”Irritated, Hunter said, “I didn’t kill him for crying out loud. I might know who did though.”When Naveen wanted to speak, they heard tires screeching outside and Hunter instantly figured it was Devi. Not minding Naveen in his way, he took off bumping him out of his way and found his way outside. He found two guards who seemed ready for h
Kate moved back and forth as she checked her watch. Where is he? She gritted her teeth. It was now getting dark and they had agreed to meet up but he was nowhere to be seen. She hated to be kept waiting.“Am i late?” Hunter asked, coming out behind her.“Yeah,” she answered annoyed. “Let’s get going. You’re riding in the trunk.”Hunter didn’t say anything. He walked round the car as she followed him. She watched him open the trunk, get into it and before she could close it, she said, “Have you heard anything from Ludo today?”“No,” he responded looking up. “I bet she’s fine. The less we hear from her, the safer she is.”“But i need to know where that Stone guy is.”“You will, let’s get going. You’re not the only one after someone.”She slammed the trunk in his face and walked back to the driver's door. Sh
She stood before the gate, looked at her watch: 18:41. She knocked again for the third time. The neighborhood was quiet. No one was in sight and that gave her chills but it was probably because of what she’d been through lately. Get ahold of yourself Ludo, she told herself.The gate squealed and Kate peeped. She saw Ludo and smiled. She widely opened it and before she could let her in, she looked around to be sure no one was around and then motioned her to enter.“I thought you were not going to show up,” Kate said as they walked to the door.“I keep my word Kate,” Ludo said.They entered the house and Kate offered Ludo a drink but she refused. There was some tension between the two women. Obviously, a lot had changed since they last met and they really needed to address the elephant in the room. Kate broke the awkward silence and asked Ludo about how she had been and how her parents were and if they were still together. They
Hunter sprinted after Stone. He saw him cross the busy road without fear. The cars hooted causing traffic on the road. Hunter ran past the cars sliding on top of the hood of one car. He could see Stone looking back as he ran and everytime he did, he increased his pace but Hunter was on him like a lion. Getting closer to him, Hunter grabbed Stone's shirt bringing him to a stop and they both fell in the middle of the road.Stone’s bag was laying on the road. Hunter slowly got up panting heavily. Stone looked at Hunter as if he knew him but didn’t say a word. He dived for his bag while Hunter jumped on but he rolled over and reached for the .44 Magnum Handgun and pointed it at Hunter.Hunter raised his hands in the air. Stone stepped back whilst looking around. In a flash, a soldier dived at Stone sending them both to the ground. Hunter stepped back and wanted to turn around when he was hit in the back with a plank; he almost fell.“Don’t mo
The previous night, after being shockingly stabbed by a machete, Ben was left gasping for air and bleeding heavily. How could he have underestimated that b****** Mapulanga? He cussed himself. He had never being this stupid. If only he could be given a chance to kill that fool, he would but looking at how things stood, he would be dead in a few minutes if the blood flow wouldn’t be contained. Damn, life flashed on his face. The k3 million wasn’t going to be spent. If Devi could play the game right, he would get it all. Screw Devi, he gasped for air even more. He was his bestfriend though. One only friend in crime. One chance, just a chance, he begged looking at the heavens.From the darkness appeared a man wearing a hood. Ben couldn’t see properly but he tried to speak. Words couldn’t leave his mouth. The man got closer and knelt before him, it was Hunter.“Jesus!” Ben spit some blood. “Not him not him.”“You&
Ben knelt before Walutanga and whispered, “This is not a personal vendetta, chap,” he started untying him.The three men got to where they were and stood looking at Ben untying Walu. He finished and turned to face them.“Where is Mapulanga?” he asked looking around.“He told us that you should take the boy to the palace in the evening,” one of the men answered.“What!” Ben yelled. “Who does he think he is? The agreement was that we meet here. He signs the papers and i hand the boy over to him. I have to get back to the city.”The three men looked at each other indifferent to what Ben was blabbering about. They had passed on the message and that was it. They told him that they had to go back. Ben was even more upset that he had to deal with Walutanga for at least another six hours. He calmed himself with the hope that it was only six hours and then their job would be done; he would be on hi
Walutanga cried his lungs out till he got tired. For the last few hours, He couldn’t see anything but could feel he was confined to a tiny space and he was in something that was moving. He remembered what happened before he blacked out.He was with Hunter and Ludo and Hunter was fighting the little man who seemed to get the better of him. He had woken up at a house with Ludo by his side who didn’t seem to be alive. He tried to wake her up but she wasn’t waking up till the little man came. Walutanga watched him admire the unconscious Ludo till he started undressing her. He couldn’t watch what the little man wanted to do with Ludo. He got up and fought him off throwing anything he could in the room at him. He dragged Ludo to his side and threatened the man that he would kill him. He knew he couldn’t but he was lucky when the other man came in the room.“What’s wrong Devi?” the other man, who happened to be Ben, had asked.