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The weak points of the System

Author: MarcyGPerez24
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The book was in my face as I took the stairs down to the lab, ignoring the mildew-like smell that came from the tunnel always being moist.

Astra had managed to find out major things about Main City; it was different place to live due to the dome-like structure it had to present itself as what the Higher Ups wanted it to appear like. The sun wasn't real, the climates weren't even real, everything was just faked due to how they wanted to keep us brainwashed.

A hidden memory surface in my mind, and then I read about something else that piqued my interests; certain glitches were made in the to see if they could single out the ones that were aware of what was going on around them.

That's how they managed to find me at seven years old.

It had been raining, when all of a sudden it stopped, the clouds disappearing a little quicker than I thought possible. I'd pointed it out to my Dad who had been distracted reading the news on his wristwatch. He'd looked up disinterested, and went
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