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Chapter 10
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2024-10-29 19:42:56After my lunch with Jacob. I'll take my way home. While I am passing the way home, I always find myself smiling and after a minute, I'm now standing in the front of our apartment. I open the door in our room and I shut off the door fast.
Hindi ko mapigilan ang sarili ko na hindi sumigaw sa kilig. Hindi ko rin naman napansin si Leona na nandito sa loob ng kwarto. Teka hindi ba siya pumasok sa kaniyang klase?
"F*uck! Why are you screaming? Where are you been? And why are you late?" She was surprised and welcome me with her rapidly question. Bakit siya nandito? May pasok ‘tong babaing ‘to ah.
"Hi Leona. Why are you here?” tinaasan niya lang ako ng kilay, napara bang sinasabi ng kaniyang mga kilay, this is also my apartment.
“I mean, you still have a class, haven’t you?” naglakad ako papalapit sa kaniya.
“Tinamad na kasi akong pumasok, kaya umuwi nalang ulit ako.” Walang ganiyang sagot.
“How did you get in?” t
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(Jacob POV) This past week, I’ve been thinking for her every night, until the drowsiness visited me at the time, I fall asleep. I don't know, this is the first time that a woman has taken in my mind, I always thinks about her. "Hey, Jacob wake up! Hey, wake up!" Zach shouted while he knocking on my door, napuyat na naman ako sa kakaisip sa kaniya kagabi. I can’t stop thinking of her, since the day I have lunch with her. Pero ang nakakapagtataka hindi ko maiwasan ang kakaiba, sobrang nawiwirduhan ako sa kakaibang pakiramdam na hindi ko maipaliwanag. Hindi ko naman na ramdaman ito sa ibang babae. "Jacoooooob! Wake uuuuuuuuup!" I hear Danny yielded. Both of them was knocking on my door, I woke up and opened the door. While rubbing my eyes using my right hand and rubbing my thighs with my left hand. "Jacob, do you want to find out who is Divina?" Zach asked. Everyday ganiyan sila lagi akong ginigising, laging sagabal sa tul
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Tinignan ko si Sofia at ganoon din siya sa akin. I gave her a sign to introduce herself na ikinalaki ng mga mata niya at ikinataas ng kaniyang mga kilay. Like where having a mind debate and she lost. "Hello I'm Sofia Natalie Corpuz." Sofia introduced herself. Ah, awkward talaga, nararamdaman ko na naman ang pag-iinit ng aking pisngi. "Hi, I'm Jacob Carter Castillo." And He did the same. Ano kaya ang meroon sa kanila at mukhang nilapitan ata kami. Heto ba ang tinitukoy ni Sofia kanina? "Oh, yeah my friends Danny-" and Sofia cut Jacob for presenting his friends. Sige go lang Sofia ikaw na kumausap sa mga ‘yan at baka mautal-utal lang ako. Because I’m not really used to talking to others especially in front of the crush, nagiging chunga-chunga ako. Nakakahiya man amin pero totoo. I really hope that I have the courage and confident to talk normally like others. "Hello Danny nice to see you again." We already met Danny
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(Third Person POV) There’s only fifteen minutes left for their last period in this afternoon. But they have not yet been dismissed by their professor. So, Divina decided to take out her book from her bag and she started read it. All her attention was on her book and she was busy with what she was doing. She did not realize that fifteen minutes had quickly passed and all his classmates had left the room even her best friend Sofia and she decided to hide outside and wait for Divina’s reaction once she notice that she was the only person left in there classroom. Dahil sa hindi namalayan ni Divina na nakalabas na lahat ang mga kaklasi niya, naisipan namang magtripan ni Sofia si Divina kaya siya nagtatago. She is the only one who sitting on her chair until the five famous arrived. If before she could not concentrate on too much noise now her focus is too deep on too much silence. "Sofia, what are you doing here? Where's Divina?" Nagtataka
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Sa dami-dami pa ng pweding magkaroon ng problema bakit kami pa? I love him and whatever painful words he says to me, even if he drives me away. I will not give him up. I will not give up our friendship. I will not give up specially now, now that he needs me and I need him. Here is my chance to make up for him and repay all his sacrifices and all his effort for me. He didn't leave me when I needed someone to be with and I could lean on, he didn't leave me but he supported me all the time. This is the time for me to do the same. "Divina, he still sleeping." We’re here in the hospital with Sofia. We just heard from Clarence that he is here.It is not even clear to me what happened to him, for what reason and why he is here. One thing is clear to me, we are here to take care of him. I'm here to make it up to him for all he did for me. I will never forget the last conversation we had. That night was the most intense fight we
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Kaya pala siya na aksidente mas pinili niyang iniligtas ang isang bata. It was now clear to me why and how he had the accident. Kahit kailan talaga inuuna ni Vince ang kapakanan ng iba bago niya isipin ang kaniyang sarili. He is really a selfless man. "Sino ang nagbabantay sa kaniya pag pumapasok ka sa school?" Usisa naman ni Sofia. Oo nga, wala bang magbabantay sa kaniya? His parents couldn't watch him because they didn't know that their son had an accident. "Salitan ang pagbabantay namin sa kaniya." Sagot ni Clarence. That’s the beauty of their friendship, maasahan sa kahit ano man ang nangyari. They are not really brothers by blood but they are more than that. "Sino naman ang kasama mo sa pagbabantay sa kaniya?" Usisa ulit ni Sofia. Hindi sila kilala ni Sofia pero ako kilala ko sila. Vince introduced me to them then meanwhile, they were often with me that’s why I used to be one of the boys. But when I met Sofia, sh
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VINCE (POV) I was awakened when I heard someone's crying. I didn't open my eyes first because she is saying something and her voice was trembling and at the same time familiar. I decided to listen to her, she holds my hand so tight. "That night you showed me your anger and pain. That was the first time I saw in your face the great anger. Noong gabing nalaman mo ang tungkol sa kanila, ‘yon din ang gabing nalaman ko ang lahat sa kanila. I haven’t lie to you at hindi ko rin naman ginusto na ilihim sayo ang mga nalaman ko. I'm sorry Vince, I'm really sorry. Nang dahil sa kanila at dahil na rin sa akin ay nasaktan ka and I hate seeing you hurting." She was crying and I can't help it but to open my eyes and I saw her looking down. Her eyes were close, but her tears are continuously flowing. She laid her head on the side of my bed. I am staring her for five minutes. She had fallen asleep in tears. I could see in her eyes that she had been crying for a long time. Mag
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(Divina POV) I can't believe, it's already two months be gone. It's been two months when I leave the house. It was almost two months ko na rin hindi kasama at nakita si Kuya. Nakalabas na rin pala si Vince sa hospital. In fact, he treats me differently, different from what he usually does and from the normal way how he thinks and acts when it comes to me. Vince is very different now. Something has really changed in him. I didn’t know he had this side, things I hadn’t seen and heard before. I don’t know why he suddenly changed the way how he deals with me. Maybe because from what he has done and told to me before? Ewan, kung ano man ang dahilan masaya ako. Today I will be going to meet my brother and Vince gave me a ride dropped me here. I’m here, in the park now waiting for Kuya Jonas. "Divina!" A familiar voice shouted my name from my back. Nang bumalin ang tingin ko sa kaniya, na pangiti ako. "Kuyaa!" I
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I didn't fall asleep right away last night because I was thinking about dad. I'm always like this, I think I’m really lacking in sleep. I wonder, where is he? I always thinking about what really happened. I want to know the truth and to gather what is the real information about my dad. If they just made it out that dad was dead or that he was really dead. I don't know why I don't want to believe them that my dad already dead. We already buried him six months ago, it means he has been gone for six months. But why there is inside telling that my dad is still alive. "Divina, I thought you were going to the airport?" Pangingising na tanong niya at dahil doon napa baliktuwas ako sa kama. I took a deep breath, this is the day that kuya will go. "By the way, what time is it?" I hurried to get some clothes from my drawer and ran to the bathroom. "Mag-almusal ka muna alasingko palang ng umaga." Natatawang saad niya, l*ka l*ka talaga
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(Third Person POV)Nang marating ni Vincent ang presinto, ay kaagad siyang sinalubong ni Ken Morgan. In his mind, he had to do everything he could to bring Jonas home safely to his friend Javis."They started to interrogate them. Ellena admitted that they planned to kidnap the children. While Benjie had no plan to say anything." litanya niya habang nalalakad papasok ng prisinto."Did Ellena admit where they took Jonas?" there are only two things on Vincent's mind right now, to make sure Ellena and Benjie are imprisoned and to make sure Jonas is safe." Yes, the police went to Jonas' place tonight to make sure he was safe." Ken replied and handed over a folder and two envelopes containing the evidence.Binuksan ni Vincent ang envelope at nakita ang mga malilinaw na letrato na kuha sa CCTV at isang USB. Mga letrato ng isang tao at ang truck na ginamit sa pagbunggo upang patayin si Javis. Mga letrato nina Benjie at Ellena habang kausap ang taong
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(Third Person POV) Jayson informed Clarence and Vincent that they need to get out of the building, using the radio they have. Clarence and Vince quickly retreated. Habang papunta sila sa pinagtaguang lugar kung saan sila magkita-kita sila. Javis could not stop his tears from flowing. While he could not get rid of the worry and fear for his children. His fear for his daughter intensified because he knew he was in critical condition and his worries for his son because he had not seen him yet. Clarence's eyes widened when he saw the blood dripping and so did Vincent. Now they know Divina's life is in danger. They are all worried about Divina's condition. Javis immediately put his daughter in the backseat of the car and Jayson quickly helped Divina. Javis quickly started the car and rush Divina to the nearest hospital. Clarence and Vince drove to another car and quickly followed Javis. Jayson removed his long sleeve doubled over the white shirt and
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"It was James who called me that night. He asked me to meet him in that place. He told me that there was a important things that he need to discuss with me. At first I asked him what its all about but he told that it is better to discuss it personally. So, I agreed even though I don't have any clues about that matter. Matagal din akong naghintay sa lugar na iyon, hanggang sa dumating siya at nagulat ako dahil sa kasama niya rin pala si Olivia." Javis took a deep breath, wipe away his tears to stop it from dripping. While remembering what happened in those moments, he thought that, he had done nothing to save his in -laws and he was also starting to get angry with himself why he only now met the family of his beloved wife Ellora. He was waiting for Ellena to say something, but she can't, her face was drowning with her tears. Kahit gusto niyang humagulgol sa pag-iyak ay hindi niya magawang gumalaw at ibaba ang kaniyang hawak-hawak pa rin na baril nakatutuk kay Javis. So,
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(Third Person POV) Javis, Jayson, Vincent and Carlos rushed in at the same time. They make a silent move even though they rush to look for lurking enemies. They bravely rushed into the enemy's den. The first one who starts is Javis, he trow a punch straight to the face of his opponent and he used his elbow to hit the jaw then he used hammer stick to knock down the first opponent he saw. Next is Jayson, he used groin kick and he immediately kick the ass of his opponent and he rotate his whole body to have a full force to kick the face of his opponent which caused it to bump into the wall and fainted. Using Carlos' elbow he hit the chest of his opponent, immediately trowed to hit the jaw, he turns back to hit the backbone, and using again his elbow he move it downward vertically to knock down his opponent. While Vincent used only his palm to give a stricke straight ahead with the base of his palm to hit the nose and he quickly breaks the neck of
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(Third person POV) Matapos nilang sabihin ang buong katotohanan kay Divina. They decided to send away their families, while they are still in a very difficult situation. Since, they already know that Benjie Anderson and Ellena wants a revenge for their fathers death and they both blaming Javis for the same reasons. Vincent decided to hide his family out of the country. Jayson sent his family far from Pampanga but still in the Philippines. While Carlo sent his family on his personal hide outs that even Javis, Jayson, and Vincent didn't know. Carlo made another hide out exclusively for his family. While Javis instructed his son Jonas and his daughter Divina to go to their secret house. Actually, only Javis and Jonas his son knows the secret house and this is the first time that Divina will know about it. nce they found out it was a revenge. They have come up with a plan to protect their families. After they all send their families away for a while, they d
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"I want to ask for a favor." it's never came up to my mind to ask a favor from him, but in needed to ask this for Divina. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. This is not for me, this is for Divina. "If I can why not." I nodded and I look at him seriously in his eyes. "I want you to promise me to take care of Divina, to be with her when she needs company. I want you to promise me to protect her, always make her happy and don't you dare to hurt her." I use my deep voice with authority. Kapag nabalitaan ko na sinaktan mo siya, babalikan kita at sisiguraduhin ko na hindi na makikilala nino man ang mukha mo. "Why suddenly you asking me to make a promise?" aiisst! Naiinis na ako, why not just to answer yes? Kailangan niya pabang tanungin iyon? Hindi ba halatang nagpaparaya na ako? Aist, naiinis na ako ang sarap niyang batukan. "Do you really love her?" gusto mo ng tanungan ah. Maling sagot mo masasapak talaga kita. "Of course, I do love her." I
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(Vince POV) I felt sorry for Divina, because she had been crying for too long. After she heard ang know the all the truth, she came out crying. I was about to approach her when Clarence suddenly stopped me. I get hurt every time I see her crying. But I have no regret that I’m one of those hidden in the truth, because we did that to keep her safe. "Bro, she need time to process everything." I looked Clarence in the eye and I could see that even him was worried and I turned my gaze back to Divina. I wanted to approach her, hug her, pero hanggang tingin na muna ako sa kaniya. I don't want make thing conplicated. I can't sit still in my seat so, after a few more minutes, I couldn’t help but approach her. Gusto ko siyang damayan sa pag-iyak niya. So, I sat next to her. I just kept uit because I diidn't know what to say. I can't find a right word to say. “Bakit wala kaman lang sinabi sa akin?" I didn't expect that she will going to talk to me. She wiped awa
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"This is the plan..." ipinaliwanag ni Vince ang naisip niyang plano. Medyo naguguluhan at hindi ko gaanong gets ang kaniyang paliwanag. ANg tanging naiintindiihan ko lang hindi nila ako papabayaan. "Gagamitin natin ang isang pang kotse ni Clarence..." Clarence drives the car we used earlier and he leaves first, for him to be followed by the fortuner and that is plan A. Kung hindi man siya sundan, Vince have to get into Clarence's other car and kuya Jonas and I will be left here inside the house for him to follow and that's plan B. If it doesn't work Clarence has to go back home, to pick us out. We go straight to Vince’s house and use Vince’s car just to add to the confusion of who he will follow and that is plan C. We don't know if it will be effective but we have to try. After ng ilang minuto ay tinawagan namin si Clarence at tinanong kung sinundan siya ng naka fortuner at sa hindi inaasahan hindi gumana na ang plan A at B. So, no choice, but
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(Divina's POV) It's been a few days since Jacob took me to their house. I'm just at home now and lying down. If you think about it, the conversation between Jacob and his mommy, tita Aviana, also lasted for a few minutes. Habang ako ay nakaupo sa coach sa may sala. After they talked, I can see in Jacob's eyes that he was so upset. He didn't say anything, he just pulled me out of their house. He walked fast and we also quickly got into the car. We never said goodbye to Tita Aviana. I could no longer speak and I did not have the courage to ask and one more thing, I was a little surprised and confused by Jacob's actions that night. He immediately started the car and he was driving fast. I didn't even ask what they talked about even though I wanted to ask especially when I heard tita Aviana say that… ‘Hindi pweding maging kayo...’ Hindi ko alam kung kami ba ni Jacob ang tinutukoy niya. Halata kasi na wala siya sa mood, baka lalo siyang mainis at isa pa pa
