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Author: Salani
last update Last Updated: 2024-10-29 19:42:56

first thing first.

wow. i never exspected this many people being intrested in my story..

to many thanks to you all

secondly 

my first language is not english which i am sure some have noticed by now..

i have gotten a comment on the grammar in the story. and i wanna listen to you all. so derfor i am ofcause going to see what i can do about that. and the first 24 chapters will ofcourse be looked at too and updated..

so please bare over with me for now.. i will do better promise.

again tank you all for reading :) 

yours sincerly

Salani

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Laura
It’s an amazing story but I would read your comment sections and take advantage of the people in the comments trying to help you better your book. Otherwise I look forward to helping you in the comments and reading your story.
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Phillipa Brennan
Absolutely amazing! This story is fantastic. For someone who doesn’t use English as a first language I am so, so, so impressed with the grammar etc. Keep up the amazing stories. Can’t wait to read more of your work.
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Sandra Wynne
this is one of my favorite book. That is why I want to buy it an put it in my collection. For your first books you did an excellent job. can't wait to read your next one
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