A Love Story With Flaws

A Love Story With Flaws

last updateLast Updated : 2022-05-26
By:  Ekta sachan  Ongoing
Language: English
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There is nothing like a perfect love story, every story has its own flaws. It is a love story of college girl Kriti and a struggling boy Aadi. They were passionately in love with each other even distance between their city can't keep them apart but little misunderstanding shook their love paradise. After being in long distance relationship for three years when close by distance their heart grew apart. Explore a love story of middle class Indian couple with lot of twist, tragedy and lots of love. Excerpt: "Will you never forgive me?" He asked with distressed tone. "When I needed you the most you abandoned me and now you want a second chance? What a joke !" She looked at him with a smirk and turned around leaving Aadi speechless. " I know i made a mistake I'll never abandon you again, I'll pursue you until you forgives me."he muttered to himself and smiled before running after her.

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Chapter 1

It was getting dark in the evening, University gates were closed now, road lamps were starting to illuminate now and vehicles on the road were getting less. A girl in a peach color dress was standing in front of the college gate. Her hazel brown eyes were filled with tears and her pale hands were trembling. She was anxiously waiting for somebody. After some time she called that someone but he didn't pick up her call. She looked at her phone and then towards the road. But there was no sign of him and he was also not answering his calls.After some more minutes, the watchman of the college came to her and said," It's getting dark and I'm also going home if your friend is not coming. Go grab a taxi. You should not stay here at night, it's dangerous."She thought for a while and started walking towards the road and hailed a t

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20 Chapters

Chapter 1

It was getting dark in the evening, University gates were closed now, road lamps were starting to illuminate now and vehicles on the road were getting less. A girl in a peach color dress was standing in front of the college gate. Her hazel brown eyes were filled with tears and her pale hands were trembling. She was anxiously waiting for somebody. After some time she called that someone but he didn't pick up her call. She looked at her phone and then towards the road. But there was no sign of him and he was also not answering his calls.  After some more minutes, the watchman of the college came to her and said," It's getting dark and I'm also going home if your friend is not coming. Go grab a taxi. You should not stay here at night, it's dangerous."  She thought for a while and started walking towards the road and hailed a t
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Chapter 2

The next day she woke up with a start because of a loud alarm clock. She took her phone and texted Aadi [GOOD MORNING ] It's her daily routine. She likes to start her day with the thought of him. Although she was hurt she didn't want to disappoint him. She made her breakfast and packed her lunch. She was wearing black skinny jeans with a light pink turtleneck top with a cute black backpack on her back. Her ponytail was dangling as she walked. She looked like a lively college girl but her face was telling a different story. Her face was devoid of any emotion. She was walking blankly towards the road to take a taxi. On the other hand, Aadi just woke up with a slight headache as he couldn't sleep at night because he was also thinking about Kriti and him.  He picked his phone to charge it when he saw Kriti's message. He sadly smiled
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Chapter 3

In front of him, Kriti was giggling at a boy who was on his one knee with a flower in his hand, like he was proposing to her. His eyes filled with rage when she accepted his rose with a sweet smile.  That smile was reserved just for him, how could she smile like that to any other boy.  He wanted to say something but his words stuck in his throat. He wanted to confront her but he also didn't want to hear from her that  now she loves someone else. He immediately ran out of the park and grasped a mouthful of air.He was suffocating there. It seems like someone has put down a large stone on his heart. His heart was squeezing with pain. Tears formed in his eyes but he
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Chapter 4

BAM!!!!!   Before he could finish his sentence Aadi delivered a heavy punch to his face. His face was red with anger, his fist was clenched.  "I dare you to say that again," Aadi yelled at him. Raj staggered back as he was drunk so he can't control his footing and fell on the floor.    Aadi hovered upon him and took his collar in his hand and said, "If you utter nonsense about her again I'll rip off your tongue... Did you get it clear?"   Raj's head was spinning because of a heavy blow and alcohol kicked him hard, his lip's skin broke and blood dripped. He clutched his head and shrieked "How dare you to punch me for a fucking girl."    At that time everyone got alert and some came to calm them, his some friends separated them both and took them to sit. . . Aadi want to beat him further but his friends held him. They didn't want to make a
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Chapter 5

It took them 20 minutes to reach in front of the college. He knew she was nervous as her palms were all sweaty and she was stammering a little in their conversation on way. It is a sign that she is nervous. She always stammered whenever she is scared or panicked  . .   He stopped his bike in the front gate and she get off the bike, she looked at the gate but couldn't take a step. He sensed her hesitation. He parked his bike in the corner, and took her hand, she was still standing there like a statue. . He sighed and took her behind the tree in corner of the college. It was a big tree, no one can see as it was a college wall behind them, they were standing between wall and tree. . .  He took her cold hands into her warm one. Feeling his warmth spread on her palms she smiled at him. "Why are you nervous? You have to come here daily from now on. You will make new friends. Aren't you excited? " h
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Chapter 6

Back to the present...   "Heyyyy !! Back to earth miss Kriti. Where are your thoughts wandering around?" Arjun said teasingly.   Arjun is her classmate. He was a talkative and playful person. But he is protective when it comes to his friends.   "Where can be her thoughts, obviously on her Aadi," Riya commented with a teasing voice. She was chewing gum and came too close to them and stood beside them.   Riya is also her classmate. She is a tomboy and had aggressive nature but she is a loyal and caring person.   They all giggled at their little bantering and head to class. She looked at them and sighed. Some months ago they were all strangers but now they are just like family. .  They never met Aadi but Kriti has told them about him. She wanted to meet them but couldn't have a chance. . .  And now some invisible problems created bet
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Chapter 7 *

. . . He instantly captured her little mouth hungrily. He was kissing her passionately. He opened her mouth with his tongue. She gladly accepts his kisses and circled her arms around his neck. He started exploring her body with his hands. He traced her waist and her back with his fingers. He was exploring her mouth hungrily. Her rosy lips and sweet mouth were intoxicating him. His kiss was not gentle it was a hot, fiery passionate, awakening desire in their bodies. . He trailed his kisses to her cheek, her jaw he started kissing, licking, biting her. He kissed her neck and she shivered instantly, Now he knew the neck is her sensitive point. He started licking her same spot and kissed her nape, he was leaving marks where he kissed. He lifted her pajama shirt and touched her bare skin as she was going to sleep so she was not wearing a bra. He can feel her harden nipples through the thin clothing of pajamas. . Her toes curled with
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Chapter 8*

Back to present He was so gentle, caring, and loving towards her. Then why he changed suddenly. She made herself a simple porridge and started to eat but she couldn't eat more than three spoons. Her appetite was gone. She thought of calling him but she restrained herself. Why should always she try to talk to him? They both are in a relationship he should make the first move too. She set down dishes to wash. And go to bed to catch some sleep, her head was hurting a lot from these tensions and the workload of college. .... Aadi didn't leave his room the whole day, he cried, didn't eat anything, when his sister came to ask him for dinner.  " I have no appetite, good night." He smiled dryly and saidAnd with, these words he slumped on his bed again.He was staring at the room ceiling blankly he remembered the day when she c
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Chapter 9

His birthday was upcoming in some days.He wanted to spend his birthday with his love. But now he didn't want to see her face. The more you love someone the more you feel hurt.  He was feeling needles prickled in his heart. He was suffocated by the thought of her loving someone else. And he was feeling enraged by her lies and fake care. She behaves as she loves him and she cares for him. He thought he was so lucky to have a loyal and loving girlfriend, but now he knew it was all just her lies. He went to apologize to her but coincidently he saw her true colors. His friends were right these girls only know how to play with someone's heart.And she is also one of them, she is not different.  He checked his phone, it was a missed call from her in the morning but after that nor a message neither a call. 
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Chapter 10

"Yes, everything is fine, it's just his birthday is coming in two days and I'm confused about what to gift him" she lied smoothly. It's not like she couldn't share secrets with Riya. It is just she didn't want to upset them with her little problems. She can manage by herself. She always thought that a relationship is a private matter of two people we should not let other opinions influence it. "Oh let's go to the mall in the evening and find him a perfect gift, ok," Riya said excitedly. Kriti successfully diverted her mind from Arjun and her. In the evening..... Kriti wore a black hoodie t-shirt and white skinny jeans. She was ready to go to the mall for her girl's time with Riya.She reached the mall at 6:20 pm. Riya was still not there. As always she was late again, that's why she told her to come at sharp 6'o clock. After waiting for 5
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